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Beautiful smile, and something else...

Beautiful smile, and something else...
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Copyright: Edward GALAGAN (ed_galagan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 201 W: 0 N: 138] (3276)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-25
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Sensual [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-11-05 4:15
Viewed: 2727
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
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  • Great 
  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 323 W: 6 N: 406] (2982)
  • [2009-11-05 4:24]

Nice to see your work again Edward, this is something different. Well thought and well planned. Beautiful model, your fill-in is really good here, narrow DOF works well for the BG. Well done.



Hi Edward,
Great frontal portrait, nice eye contact and seductive and photogenic pose. Great pic and TFS.

Amazing....The light, the pose , the Bg, FG and everything else just "falls into place" perfectly...creative work here and simply brilliant! TFS!



Hi Edward..

Beautiful smile. Yes. And something else ... YES ... the eyes !!

The colors are so vivid and clear , great framing and background.

Good result.

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  • john1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 0 N: 886] (8448)
  • [2009-11-05 6:37]

Hello Edward,

Excellent portrait, very nice pose and wonderfull brown eyes. Great framing and beautifull model.
Good job.

Hi Edward,

Your model is looking as beautiful as ever,and with your lovely lighting it's just delightful.



Apart from the beatiful modeland her pose, I relly like the depths of the colours i this one. You can see it's been made with a 5D.
Good work



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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2009-11-05 11:55]

Hi Ed,
Nice to see you back, the focus on this girl is great, great skin tones and overall shot. Glad your'e back. TFS

Boa noite
Happy and "malicious". Good work as usual but alwyas good to see.
My regards

ciao Edward.. i'm glad you have returned in Ukraine this summer.. and to find again your favorite model.. with new posts!!
sure.. you have incresed your sensual touch in this capture.. maybe too much for this site.. however.. i really like this incredible and glamour capture.. full of unquiet feellings.. where sight, so dierct.. that creates a strong link with every observer.. dress/undress pose.. is simply wonderful.. maybe not really politically correct but so cool indeed..
great as usual.. my compliments
ciao Marco

Hello (again) Edward,
Apart from the undeniable technical qualities and the sensuality of this photo, I also like the touch of humour you and your model achieved to put in it. A typical "Ed Galagan humour", I'd say: subtly obvious (or obviously subtle ;o)).
I also like the combination of colours: though quite contrasted (brown and turquoise) they are in harmony.
I'm just a bit less happy with the frame: too dark in my opinion. It somehow detracts from the colours in your photo, from the beautiful smile and... from that something else ;o). I would have put a white frame.
Anyway, delicious work ;o).
TFS & kind regards,

Hello Edward!
Perfect focus, wonderful colours!
Great detail and clarity!
Excellent work!
Best regards!

Hi Edward
Well, well, well, I love to look at your model in her eyes. lol
You're a lucky man to make such beautiful photos...

yes something else very eyecatching ^^

nice one



Me encanta la composición y contrástes bien marcados...saludos

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