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Copyright: Bernarda Ber (Ber) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 79 N: 346] (6326)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-11-01
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/22, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-03-11 6:42
Viewed: 2088
Points: 3
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To dipsybee: !Ber 1 03-11 10:51
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Hi Bernarda,

This is an interesting shot. When we look through the window, we can see a picture of everyday life and a story being told. I like the blurred effect of the condensation on the glass, it gives the effect of a painting. Also the light catching the flowers is very effective. I wonder why you chose such a small aperture and high ISO of 1000? With a wider aperture, you would have achieved a sharper image. The only thing what distracts from the whole thing for me is the reflection of the sun on the glass at the top left of the image, although we can see clearly the woman smiling which is the key thing here. Maybe she had just received those lovely flowers from her visitor? This is an interesting shot.

Regards

Joy

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Hi
I like your photo and wanted to tuch 8:)
I hope you like it.
Best,
Mihriban

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