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3 Apple

3 Apple
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Copyright: M A Saeedi (drmsaeedi) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 1 N: 8] (131)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-10-14
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/4, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-10-14 21:26
Viewed: 1316
Points: 0
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3 apple from one tree in my minigarden, Kallateh e BabaAhmad, North of Mahdishahr
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To christor: Another photo from two applesdrmsaeedi 1 10-19 10:16
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Hello! This is an interesting image, and I think you can do better if you make some different choices with background and how you arrange the apples. The rug is very colorful but is also very distracting. A simple background or plainer colurs are preferable so they do not take away from the colors of the fruit. The apples are not very well focused, and there seems to be a lot of digital noise in the image. This can be corrected in photoshop. Something to try is to put one of the apples in front of the other two and focus in closely upon the three of them together to show the shiny skin and nice texture of the fruit. If you also get rid of any extra background it will simplify the image and improve it. I hope these points may help you in future.I have been away from Treklens for a while....gaining skills and perfecting my own work in photography and hope that you accept my critique as an attempt to help you get better at this art.

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