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Liri #1


Liri #1
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Copyright: Udi J Tirosh (udijw) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 35 W: 3 N: 34] (295)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-16
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-70, Nikkor 50mm 1.8D
Exposure: f/11, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): My favorite portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-09-18 8:04
Viewed: 3516
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a picture of my baby daughter Liri, she is 8 month old now.
I took this picture against a white background, with one flash for my dearest and one for the background.
this is my first "studio" work, if you can call my home living room a studio :).

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  • Great 
  • Lotus Gold Star Critiquer [C: 71 W: 0 N: 8] (264)
  • [2005-09-18 9:23]

Cute ! un regard magnifique, photo pleine de douceur.
Félicitations !

  • Great 
  • Klaud Gold Star Critiquer [C: 107 W: 5 N: 124] (1762)
  • [2005-09-18 9:29]

Lovely
Very cute and very well mastered for a fist studio like photography.
Baby shooting is very hard and it seem you have a very good subject ;-)

If you plan to do more, I suggest you to buy a small reflector, or a piece of foamcore board. On your first atempt, I noticed a small shadow on the left part. For that type of photography, less shadow is better, at least in my humble opinion.

Bravo again ;-)

hey udi!
the vibrant colours, the positioning and angle, are brilliant here. love the kid's eyes, their huge.

cheers
-Bart

Hello Udi !

You fon't have to go at the studio to take her. You did a great job.

Congratulations Stunning results! You have a cute loittle girl with georgeous eyes.

These greens elements are very softs. I love the curves, like baby skin....
Cheers!
Robert

hi udi,
she's nice,the green element whatever it is,well chosen subject,adds the compo and Liri seems she would never feel herself away from cameras,looks very natural.
regards

Again, Wonderful!! This is an outstanding shot. The prop really compliments her eyes. Great expression.

  • Great 
  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1153 W: 70 N: 1116] (16)
  • [2005-10-08 6:31]

nice capture.
Mitra

Another great portrait. I like the simple composition of the green object that lets you focus on your daughter. The lighting is great.

Regards,

Tom

Hi Udi,
She is sooo cute, your little one:)) Great photo with her toy and I agree with Amy (persimon) that the crop compliments her beautiful eyes.

WEll DONE and am looking forward to see more of your photos!

Cheers,

Shelly:)

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