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twin daisy


twin daisy
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Copyright: Taner Sesler (tsesler) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 638 W: 12 N: 1149] (6320)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2012-04-15
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D5100
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2012-06-01 2:26
Viewed: 1674
Points: 10
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Bom dia Taner,
Good shallow DOF and frontal POV. Yellow center of reference flower a bit unsharp, IMHO. Good composition, details, lightness and colors.
Have a good WE.
R.

Dear Taner,

Good to see posting after a long gap!

Indeed, a wonderful POV in this shot which does give a certain depth in the scene too, however, I feel that required focus on the heart of the flower is missing and it does decline the overall appeal of this floral picture drastically. IMHO, the focal point seems to have landed on the petals of the flower (on R.H.S.).

In addition, there is no note accompanied to this picture.

Whereas, light is concerned it is well captured and exposure is good too.

Wishing you a better luck next time.

Have a nice weekend.

Greetings,
Paras

Are these gear wheels? It's a really good composition. Though it lacks some clarity and a descriptive note, as Paras remarked, the idea is good. TFS.

Hi Taner, Waouhhh, what a surprise to see you on the site! this was a long time since you gave no more from you! I can not believe it, you're back, with two pretty little daisies, one super sharp, blur into the other, very artisitique! nice colors, excellent brightness superb detail is perfect, the King of Macro is back! Welcome to TL!!!!
Best regards
Odile

Hi Taner,
Perfect use of shallow DOF. These twin daisies are marvelously captured from such a frontal view. I like the low viewpoint. Splendid exposure with accurate management in light. A lovely crop and quite a neat Nature presentation.
My best regards,

Francis Xavier

Ciao Taner, lovely composition with beautiful flowers, fine details, excellent sharpness, wonderful natural colors and splendid light, very well done, my friend, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

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