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Goodbye autumn


Goodbye  autumn
Photo Information
Copyright: necla erikci (ayse51) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-11-22
Categories: Nature, Artwork
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-01-04 12:35
Viewed: 1206
Points: 60
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Bu gün Ankara'ya ilk kar düştü.Artık sonbahara veda zamanı....

Sonbahar Bedenleri

Soyundu
Saçlarından ağaçlar
Bir kadın gibi

Sonbahar çıplak

Ağlıyordu
Terkedilmiş bir bebekti
Gece gündüz

Sonbahar ıslak

Gazeller arasında üşüyen
Ellerim
Avuçlarımda çatlamış toprak

Sonbahar soğuk
Ben sonbahardan soğuk

Sonbahar hüzün
Sonbahar veda

Susturulmuş dudaklarında
Çiğ taneleri
Titriyor
Mum alevi gibi bedenleri

Sonbahar hüzün

Gazeller arasından
Göçmen kuşların kanadına takılıp
Hiç öpülmeden
Vedasız gidenler

Sonbahar veda
Sonbahar bedenleri elveda.

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Hello Necla,

Excellent composition with perfect lighting and perfect PP work!
The colors are wonderful!
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

Merhaba Necla, great autumnal composition with splendid golden colors, fantasti light, very well done my friend, ciao Silvio

Selam Necla Hanım,
Sonbaharda, güneşin altın ışıklarıyla yıkanan yapraklar, muhteşem bir görsellik çıkarmış ortaya.Elinize sağlık.
Selmalrımla..
hAyAti

Hi Necla,
When I was in the winter pictures I want to show the beauty of the snow. It turns out, the dealer must not forget also.
Very nice golden yellow leaves a good angle from the sun, good focus, a pleasure to see the picture. TFS
Best regards Sandor

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 0 N: 4177] (21534)
  • [2010-01-04 13:41]

Merhaba Necla :)

How here nicely, they look in the sun list magnificently. :)
Very showy formulation, beautiful, natural colours and light.

I congratulate realization.

My best wishes.
Barbara

Bonsoir Necla
Très jolie photo.
J'aime beaucoup la lumière...
Catherine

The golden colors are very nice. However, the vignette does not look natural and is distracting.

Thanks!

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2010-01-04 15:10]

Merhaba Necla,
Splendid autumn landscape. What composition and what colors!
Superb player, congratulations.
Best thoughts,
Adrian

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839)
  • [2010-01-04 22:19]

Hello Necla

Thats a very nice capture and excellent use of o-e
I like ur composition the way yellows filling the frame.
I dont think that the yellowish gradient is adding here but thats just me :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

Ciao Necla


Ah .. goodbye to the autumn is wonderful,
the season of beautiful color palette!
Splendid taken, very well made.
Composition and colors are attractive.
Good captured and presentation.

Sergio

Hola
Bonito colorido amarillento de las hojas de este arbol , buen encuadre luz , nitidez y color con una acertada edicion de desenfocar el contorno
buen trabajo
un saludo

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2010-01-05 7:58]

Hello Necla

A superb Autumn shot of the golden foliage with excellent sharpness & framing on the tree. I like the vignetting effect. Tfs!

Wow, what a beautiful autumn scenario you have captured here, Necla, my friend!
It seems like a dream come true.

A lovely capture with natural colors and perfectly chosen POV. The sharpness and clarity are amazingly well done. Great job!

best regards,
Paras

Hi Necla
amazing golden image.
perfect composition.
good light on leaves on the tree and under.
nicely framed and presented.
greetings
tsilla

Necla Hanım,
Şiir fotoğrafa yakışmış.Tam bir sonbahar resmi.Bizim Bodrum'da etraf yemyeşil.HavalarYağmurlu idi ama çok soğuk olmadı.Bahçemdeki mineler yeniden açti,begonviller bu güzel havalara aldandı küçük yapraklarını açtı.
Sarı renk ile Muhteşem bir fotoğraf.Tebrikler,sağlıklı günler.
Ataman

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1165 W: 2 N: 215] (16615)
  • [2010-01-05 8:48]

very colour-full and with sober sunlight

Merhaba Necla,

Beautiful autumn scene.
Great POV, sharpness, use of natural light and perfectly shown autumn colors.
Added vignetting effect makes the photo more beautiful.

Best regards,
Tatjana

Merhaba Necla Hanım,
Altın renkli,ışıklı bir sonbahar karesi...
Hüznün mevsiminde yaşama sevinci veren bir çalışma.
Kutluyorum. selamlar,sevgiler.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

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  • mistic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 259 W: 1 N: 101] (2985)
  • [2010-01-05 10:51]

splendide ambiance automnale
la luminosité dorer est splendide et rechauffe bien les feuilles de cet arbre
belles couleurs chaudes

magnifique

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2010-01-05 11:51]

Hello Necla, I love the warm light and colors in this one! It warms me up! :-) Well composed, good sharpness and exposure too, good job! Thanks!

Mario

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2010-01-05 13:48]

Merhaba dear Necla!
Extraordinary composition! Your garden is wonderful!
Marvellous golden colours and lovely lighting.
Excellent Presentation.
Ciao! vanda

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-01-05 16:41]

dear Necla,
an illusionary art work of beautiful late autumn scene,
autumn light, yellow color of leaves and fine atmosphere are very nice,
and my favorite composition this is,
thank you for your wonderful picture,
Akihisa

Fantastic, skillful capture of this beautiful evening rim light through the last remaining autumn leaves....love the pp work treatment with a creative vignette effect that suits the mood of the picture. Great work and TFS!

Dilshan

Vignette works well here Lovely fall shot and colours
Nice work
warm regards
David

Hello Necla..:)

Very nice composition,light and color..
Nice POV and sharpness.. :)
Nicely taken and well done..

CM

Hello Mrs.Erikci,
Wonderful warm colors with golden leaves,this kind of shot is not easy shooting almost against the sun,the leaves on ground adds more beauty in your warm composition,the off center placement of tree enhances the beauty of framing elegantly,lovely poem with this subtle mood shot with golden presentation.
TFS,
Best Regards,
Mushtaq Hussain

ben sonbaharin renklerini seviyorum kendisini degil;çünkü benden yazi çaliyor.
güzel bir sonbahar manzarasi ve manipulasyonun daha da bir seyirlik kliyor kompozisyonunu!
merci!
ömer

Hi Necla
Wonderful composition,lovely autumn colours and tones,great lighting and sharpnes.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

Hello Necla,
Magnificent artwork!
Lovely color tones, fantastic light.
Excellent composition and presentation.
TFS

Olá Necla

Uma bela foto de uma bela árvore
com folhas amarelo ouro que também
forram o chão...
Gosto da composição; ótima luz.
Parabéns
GA
Vera

This is very pretty Necla. I love the golden hues, the featured tree is stately and sharp, lighting is exquisite. Best regards.

Danilo

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