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Effects of Time - Evening..


Effects of Time - Evening..
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Copyright: David Jessop (WhiteKnight) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 130 N: 2138] (12018)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-01-22
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Nikon D200 Digital SLR, Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 DC EX HSM, 77 mm circular Polarizer
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-01-25 8:56
Viewed: 2057
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 54
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ok - thanks to 'Jackal's' advise I took a look at another website and learned about using the gradient tool... So, as I was not happy with my first posting of this idea and image I radically overhauled it with hours of tedious masking and layering and then pasting the buildings onto a newly created gradient background. The sky to the left is identical in colour to my original shot.. Fading to black, but I had made a mess of the sky before.

The buildings are a merge of 16 images taken over a 40 minute period as the sun set and the lights came on going from left to right - daylight to night.

I added the stars using the clone tool off a bright light on one of the buildings at right. HPP, a bit of fun and I'm sure it looks better than my first post of this.

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3627 W: 881 N: 2607] (21386)
  • [2010-01-25 9:02]
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Oh my God, this is incredible !!!
Amazing piece of work

Chapeau Maitre !

Hello David
Waw....what a beauty!
Amazing sharpness of the details and colors are fantastic!
Warm congratulation!
Horia

Are you happier with this one?
This is very cool .. the result is very surrealistic. Those towers are almost 3D against the whacky sky! Love the result of your experiments. Good work!! :)
Trudy

Hi David...!
I like too much your work here.....
Well executed....great result.....
Image of great quality...
Bravo!!!
Claude

WOW! Amazing work David and all that processing would have me fingers bitten off by now! I love this idea, never would have thought of doing something like this! Excellent pp work!
B-)
linda

Bonsoir David

Très beau tableau surréaliste!!
Un travail très réussi!!!
TFS et bravo!
Catherine

Now that is kind of unique David ,i don't think it has been presented in such manner on this site before , what a view you 've got from the roof of your house ,you put to good use your wide angle lens as the view is gorgeous, sharp as a tack too, tedious work it must have been but fun at the same time ,the result was worthy of the effort you put into this work , you are a very determined person my friend, tfs,
Carol
Carol

Hi David!
An interesting effect you have "cooked" here.
I like the result at all.

Just a small suggestion. The hard edges around the skyscrapers could be avoid be reducing (or extending, depending on your selection) the selected area +/- 1 pxl and then fade is also.

Otherwise a lovely photo, especially the lights.

Have a nice evening
Atha

hi there,

yeah this one looks awesome, effort in pp work paid off. lovely the idea of stars.

tfs
mehmood

Hi David
Great idea,very creative work,fantastic effect.
TFS and for joining in the theme.
Regards
Andrzej

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  • Clanyi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 254 W: 7 N: 100] (7054)
  • [2010-01-25 10:21]

Hi David! Waw, great work. Fantastic work. Best regards Csabi

Definitely looks better! I think this really gives the effect of dusk into night-time, the tones are better and the gradient into shadow works well.

The stars are a nice touch - sometimes it takes a little photomanipulation to bring an image into line with our perceptions of the world. ;)

Rew

Boa noite david

.....( cont)
amazing work , ( so much things I don´t know) . I just can tell you this is wonderfull to look and so dreaming to me.
Bravo!
My regards
teresat

hi, David. This is a very well exposed nocturnal shot. the clarity is amazing with crisp details. Your time was well spent with the the PP work. Cheers and TFS.

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 815 W: 26 N: 803] (9058)
  • [2010-01-25 14:31]

Hi David,
the transition is much smoother, definitely one of the best of these time-lapse shots that I have seen - well worth the effort
cheers
Jack

Hi David,

Very graphic effect, sounds like a lot of work,it just seems to merge a little quickly to dark on the right side, but that's being picky it's a really super shot, well done.

Douglas

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  • Athila Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 286 N: 822] (4030)
  • [2010-01-25 19:29]

Hi David,

Very interesting effect you are showing us now. The grandiant tool use has been applied marvelously. It does look strange to the eyes, but I fully understand your goal, and you made it work wonderfully. I have to try it eventually, it seems to have a lot of potential for peoples with imagination. Great work and TFS.

Alain

HI David..nice shot...excellent PP work...very creative and artistic...well done.

Roger

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-01-26 6:39]

Hello,

quel ciel, une merveille, quelle ambiance, cette pureté dans les couleurs, le'ffet de mouvance dans ce ciel et la vue sur ces building, grandiose.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2010-01-26 7:15]

Hello David! That's a stunning work! Very impressive composition but a fabulous technique. Very well done! I don't think I fully understand how you did all this but let me tell you it works! Congrats!

Mario

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3311 W: 1066 N: 5188] (23042)
  • [2010-01-26 10:44]

Hi David,
This is one of the best experimental photo I have seen on TL for a long time! You cleverly improved your original which was already one of a kind!
What I like more, here is the subtle progression of the light on the buildings and sky. The stars add a feeric mood so effective with this kind of image. All my compliments! Annie

Hi David,
Very impressive night shot vith great POV, lighting and sharpness.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

Hi David,
Great ppwork and lovely details,
Excellent POV. and light,
Nice colors too and great architecture.
very well done.
Michel

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 7 N: 1012] (5621)
  • [2010-01-27 6:31]

nice and different from what you usually do david :)

although, i must say that the subject as a whole could be improved with different ideas (same treatment) and different star/sky setup..

am myself considering doing a heavily post processed landscape :)

have a great day :)

muhammad muhsin

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  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 323 W: 6 N: 406] (2982)
  • [2010-01-27 12:11]

Excellent work David, I won't surprise one day you're one of those guys here in TL having a brilliant skills in HPP. Keep on exploring and TFS. Well done.

Buddy

Hello David! Fantastic cityscape. Gorgeous architecture. Marvelous composition. Great effect. Good luck!

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2010-01-31 5:46]

Hello David

I saw the original, & wasn't that impressed, to be honest, but the hours of pp work in the repost here, have really paid off. A true work of art now, with impeccable sharpness & good colour & gradation. Nice entry in the theme too. Tfs!

This post is so wonderful and fascinating, David, I love your work very much.
Also to see the impressive new towers, that's great.
Thanks my friend, I enjoy looking at this shot very much
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2010-02-16 11:27]

Im glad people like you are taking care of the standart and quality of TL!

jan

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