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Through the Field

Through the Field
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Copyright: Steven Wymer (Scribble) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 58 W: 0 N: 1] (202)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-30
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-10 0:09
Viewed: 1022
Points: 4
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This dosn't really tell a story, it has no real body to it, It would be cool if it had an animal or a person sitting there or something like that, cool colors though.

Colin is right, it does not tell a story. However, there may be a story just waiting out of shot. Continue along the track through the grass and you may find something interesting or surprising...you knows? I can see what you were tryng to do here.Seems over expposed and or saturated.

Well; the story is there! For instance a place of crime or a secret place for lovers; the are now hiding deep in the grass. Just use the phantasy to bring in the facts.
I like such an empty place; triggering my imagination. The overexposed sky brings the tension.
Steven; go on experimenting; follow the eyes; your taste is good enough.

I agree with Huub. This is a good experimental piece. The saturation makes it appear somewhat outer wordly. One of the more famous pieces by Albrecht Durer is an etching entitled 'das kleine rasenstuck'. It was a advancement in art at that time, considering the subject matter (and absence of a story). I think nearly 400 years later it should be acceptable to present a simple mood picture, and as Huub says, the story is implied. Very Romantic.

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