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Only chairs .. after Winter


Only chairs .. after Winter
Photo Information
Copyright: Jose Adolfo Segura (jafsc) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 445 W: 47 N: 88] (4688)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon F4, Nikkor AF 70-300 mm, Fuji Superia xtra400
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): chairs [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-12 16:50
Viewed: 2231
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This 'minimalist' shot cause a little discussion and questionning. It was only my hope for sharing some of things are in our yards after snow and winter is gone :)
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Jose,
without notes, exif data or anything more than a snapshot of only half of two plastic chairs, I am not sure what you wanted to parlay to us here on Trek Lens.
Surely you didn't earn your 4514 points by doing this.
You been too busy to dedicate the time and effort?
What gives?
Scott

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  • Leica Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 113 W: 54 N: 79] (3180)
  • [2008-05-12 18:00]
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What are you trying to convey Jose if I may ask?

No note needed, I think... The combination title/image is sufficiently suggestive. The after winter feel is very well rendered (I even would have reduced the title to "After Winter").
What bothers me though, is the yellow spot behind the chairs. It is detracting and does not fit with the overall minimalism of your picture. I would have cloned it out.
Just my opinion, of course. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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