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Vestige
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Copyright: Pascal Eric Servais (metamorphose) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 85 W: 45 N: 90] (477)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-19
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon D80, Nikkor VR 18-200mm F/3,5-5,6G
Exposure: f/22, 3 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-12-12 12:14
Viewed: 1206
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is inside an old Singer workshop. I don't know when it was closed but some investors plan to make it a heath center soon or the like. You can see pigeon feathers on the floor...

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Hi Pascal-Eric,
this is an interesting idea you are showing in this picture. I personally - with my fetish for details rather than the whole - would have concentrated on a piece of the floor with pigeon feathers or the graffito or a section of the "ceiling" or that pipe or or or... but maybe that's just me..
regards
soya

Hi Pascal,
Love this, this would be the perfect location for a fashion shot, I can almost see some humain presence in that shot. Reminds me of a location where I did a shooting a did many years ago.
Good exposure, althought it could be a bit more somber, to create and other ambiance. It would also tone down the pale columns and ceiling, also giving it more definition.
But overall a very nice symetrical shot.
Well done.

P.s. Thanks for your visit.

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 981 W: 61 N: 169] (29336)
  • [2009-02-14 4:52]
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Un temple pour la photographie, j'adore y rendre visite de temps à autres. C'est ta composition qui m'a inspirée l'idée du temple.

Iso.

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