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Passage In Time


Passage In Time
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Copyright: Pascal Eric Servais (metamorphose) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 85 W: 45 N: 90] (477)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-19
Categories: Architecture, Artwork, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Nikon D80, Nikkor VR 18-200mm F/3,5-5,6G
Exposure: f/32, 1/2 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-11-06 2:40
Viewed: 1643
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is an interior view of an old disused shop which has been replaced by a brand-new health center. I like the POV very much but the light conditions were not very good so the original picture was too much dark to my taste and had some ISO noise. So I had to do a lot of processing in order to highlight the colors to my liking.

Technically, I followed the instructions of the Gaussian Blur Overlay and the "Smart" Sharpening tutorials. The latter, in order to prevent the sharpening of the high ISO noise. I also had to make distortion correction.

The original picture is in workshop.

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2009-11-06 6:37]
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Bonjour Pascal
La vielle Singer je presume?
Je me souviens du sifflet du midi et de 5 heures et des barrieres qui entourait ce complex.
Tu a fait d'excellent travail de graphique c'est fascinant de voir l'original qui est un peu epeurant.
Bonne composition
Dot

It's well proportioned and the colors great.Regards Otto.

Salut Pascal Eric,

Tu as fait de l'excellent travail de post-traitement. Tu as su redonné une belle luminosité à un lieu pauvrement éclairé, et dans ta démarche, tu as réussi à rehausser la vivacité des teintes. Ceci démontre très bien qu'une photo ne se termine pas seulement avec la fin du déclic, mais bien quand l'artiste est prêt à la présenter, après bien sur le traitement final. C'était pareil à l'époque du film, où ceux qui avait la chance de pouvoir faire eu même la chambre noire avait un contrôle bien plus grand que ceux abstraint à envoyer leur photo au labo. Bravo, belle réalisation.

Alain

Ciao Pascal



A beautiful empty warehouse where creativity
people have been very well taken advantage of
graffite. a beautiful play of light and shadows
creates good atmosphere in the environment!
Colors and depth are very well.
Sharpness and clarity are superb.

Sergio

Hello Pascal:)
your pov is effective.. with different sights.. close and far..
good composition and very nice colour and beautiful light and shadows.
Thanks for instructions:)
pozdrav
Mitko:)

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