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The Red Line


The Red Line
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Copyright: steven carter (Stevenwc) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 0] (201)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-12
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/1600 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-01-31 17:39
Viewed: 1661
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
for my second post I am posting an architectural/ abstract
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Interesting subject matter, very nicely composed and captured with wonderful shadows.

although i have no idea of what this may be, I do agree this red line looks good, the play of shadow adds a nice touch.
Jacline

Very cool. I think its a bit too empty on the right side and you could crop off some of to make it even more of a dramatic composition.
John

Great capture ... I can't help thinking there was some post-processing here, though, perhaps some blur or diffuse glow added? Or is it darkroom/ in-camera effects?

Rew

Hi Steven, fascinating abstract composition with superb graphic, very well done, ciao Silvio
PS May be better if you post at 800 pixel:)

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2841 W: 398 N: 3076] (34114)
  • [2008-02-01 8:16]

Hi Carter...
nice shot and detail..bravo..
selamlar

its like an abstract art work
well done

jolly nice posting!
nice composition
well rendered the disomogeneity of the white

ciao
anna

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  • pdp Gold Star Critiquer [C: 110 W: 39 N: 123] (538)
  • [2008-02-07 13:01]

Hi Steven, you have some nice shots in your gallery. I like this one but I agree with the earlier poster about the right hand side. I think having the red pipe more to the right and incorporating more stairs would be good. Well done, good shot.

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