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first encounter sunset

first encounter sunset
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Copyright: joy keogh (dipsybee) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 111 N: 621] (2456)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06
Categories: Nature
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): PLAGES ET COTES DU MONDE [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2010-07-25 14:17
Viewed: 1994
Points: 3
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  • Good 
  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 213 W: 97 N: 368] (3380)
  • [2010-07-25 21:29]

I'm pleased to be the first to welcome you to TL. You have posted a very pretty scene which has pleasing colour and exposure. I suggest two issues which could improve the shot. There is a good deal of noise in the image which is not uncommon in low light shots. There are many ways to avoid or reduce noise including photo processing applications. The second point relates to the composition of the shot - the central placement of the sun and the horizon is not ideal. This image is well suited to the "rude of thirds" approach. If you are unfamiliar with these things I suggest you put them at the top of your "to learn" list.
Happy Trek Lensing,

  • Great 
  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10572)
  • [2010-12-05 21:01]

Hi Joy,

Here I reached to the first upload, I'm looking at the date that when it was submitted so, I can feel the situation the cool breez and the quietness. I like beaches and water front as I'm located here in barren mountains that shots like this attracts me too much, well shot beautiful colours, TFS.


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