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The Getty Center


The Getty Center
Photo Information
Copyright: Monika Wiktorowicz (shrill) (33)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-09-21
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Architecture
Camera: NIKON D-80 DSLR, Nikkor 10-24mm f/3.5-4.5 G ED AF-S
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-10-20 18:33
Viewed: 1552
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is outside Restaurant at the Getty Center. I used some tonal mapping to bring out the colors and detail.
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To Kilted-Arab: overexposed sky???atomas59 6 10-22 07:49
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Hi Monika - just a few comments from me. I think the scene is potentially interesting, but really needs more of a human element to lift it up a level, perhaps a couple in the nearest table would help.

Also, the sky is overexposed with no apparent detail - I'd go as far as suggesting a landscape crop starting from the bottom and finishing maybe about a third of the way up the image...that would get rid of the troublesome sky and give a nice compact feel. I'm not overly keen on the colours, but there is almost a Parisien feel here that may be helped by the crop.

Finally - the signature - it's distracting and pointless, even if someone wanted to steal the image the sig could be cropped or cloned out. Sorry.

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