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Stewarts Island


Stewarts Island
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Copyright: Erwin Kruger (Jonathan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 816 W: 0 N: 376] (13989)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-23
Categories: Mood
Camera: Canon Digital Rebel XT 350D, 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 EF-S Canon, Digital
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-26 2:22
Viewed: 2676
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One of the New Zealands beautiful islands.
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hi erwin
great sunset image beautiful sky colours and cloud formation,
regards
jimmy

Hi Erwin
Beautiful sunset with nice colors. Now it would be great if you would level the horizon and apply the rule of thirds.
Have a great day
David

Hi Erwin
nice view of islands
nice colors are catch but a little horizon is not good
for few millimeters but next time more better.
have a nice week
Riste.

I visited Stewart Island when I was about 12 or 13 and, a typical teenager, I lamented the lack of cars, buildings, shops etc. I'm sure I would feel differently about it now.

Elemental to this shot is the light you've captured along the hull of that moored boat - it's excellent. The smooth tones of the water are great too.

I think composition could be stronger, either a portrait-orientation crop to narrow the image down to boat and setting sun, eliminating much of the left and right-hand sides of the photo; or placing the horizon higher in the frame to get that magic 1:2 ratio.

Rew

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