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Goodbye sun

Goodbye sun
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Copyright: sian sian (neverlandkids) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 298 W: 0 N: 66] (2319)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-01-02
Categories: Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Canon PowerShot A80
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Circles at sunset series [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-02-18 4:21
Viewed: 4274
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 36
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One last sunset picture with my 'circles in sand' drawing pair. See, they are walking off into the sunset, saying goodbye! :)

I cropped some of the sky and sides a little. I'm not sure about whether to crop more and bring them closer...

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Jaimeson: hi Jaimesonneverlandkids 1 08-16 18:41
To miss_bibi: Aw, thank you!neverlandkids 1 04-03 20:08
To Jancie: Thank you!neverlandkids 1 04-03 05:06
To vanbeeck: Thank you!neverlandkids 1 03-19 04:41
To reveur59: Thank you!neverlandkids 1 02-18 19:10
To laine: Thanks!neverlandkids 1 02-18 19:07
To letr: Thank youneverlandkids 1 02-18 19:04
To alagoa: Thank you!neverlandkids 1 02-18 05:48
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  • gaby Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 151 W: 0 N: 87] (1403)
  • [2005-02-18 4:28]

Very nice - warm colors

If you cropped more you would spoil it I am sure. It's a very beautiful and intense sunset. The reflections give it an interesting mood. Good work.

Once again another excellent photograph.
I have enjoyed your mini series, thankyou for sharing them with us.

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  • laine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 355 W: 37 N: 107] (885)
  • [2005-02-18 11:35]
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The sunset here is amazing! Don't know how the picture looked before cropping but I think I wouldn't cropped it. The colour is so intense here. Great!

Very alive composition.. The sun... Two persons... The beach.... It give the taste to be there...

That picture is beautiful too, color stronger less pastel but still magic, maybe if you crop a bit at the right that will put the subject less in the center and give it more dynamic... But all your serie is very nice and you are lucky to lived a so great moment of love... and talentful to transmit to us...

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 420 N: 1093] (6670)
  • [2005-02-18 14:55]
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You were not sure about the cropping ? , well IMO you cropped to much...with a sunset picture it is very nice to have a wide view in it or..simply to have the sun and the reflection on the water ( this is my personal opinion ) ..for this picture I wouldn't have cropped so much and maybe i would have taken it with a diagonal view from the beach and the sea, that way you would have created more depht, now it is to frontel , hoping this is making sense to you ??nevertheless this is a very nice sunset view with very good colorbalce and sharpness !!

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  • tommy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 171 W: 0 N: 28] (202)
  • [2005-02-18 16:58]

nice. that is all.

I have a weakness for sunset... This one is beautiful as previous one.


Very nice picture! The colors are dazzling! I love it!

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3204 W: 262 N: 7964] (34497)
  • [2005-04-01 14:49]
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What a beautiful sunset Sian. The mother and child are placed quite strategically just to the right of the setting sun. Good composition. Well done!
I think you've left the right amount after your crop.

Such a beautiful picture! It gives out such a warm and incredible feeling! I don't know why but this picture really touches me! GREAT JOB!


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  • fon Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 55] (309)
  • [2005-04-06 6:20]

Wonderful sunset,enquadramento,colour and reflexes a little prejudiced but it didn't remove the quality of trabalho.Congratulations...


Great colours and composition Sian. An appealing photo.

Wonderful sunset picture ...
Lovely colours and composition.
Cheers - Lakshmi

Looks great the way it is!

superb exposure and silo shots, tfs.


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