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Sunset factory

Sunset  factory
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Copyright: Allen ML (atsouth) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 98 W: 32 N: 114] (1137)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-31
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Cannon PowerShot A640
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Old brick factory [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-21 9:02
Viewed: 2363
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Besides the three chimneys there is also this building that was part of the factory, and the chimney that comes out of it is the one seen at the right of the bg in this image . I was already walking away after taking the pictures from the other chimneys and saw the sky quickly turn into the golden sunset so i shot a few more.

The same pic with a black frame on a ws as i couldn't decide which to upload, which one do you prefer?

Applied slight curves, usm

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To PierreCapoue: thanksatsouth 1 07-23 09:28
To crhieatt: thanksatsouth 1 07-23 09:26
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great idea and well executed.


Another nice one from this location.
The white frame works better here because of all the black at the bottom of the picture which merges into the frame IMO.
But the black one would be fine with a little white border to separate picture from frame. See workshop example in a moment or two!

Still a very beautiful picture, I very much appreciate your vision of industrial relics.
You could also use a HDR to further improve the image, isn't ?

This is a very beautiful image,

hello Allen

An excellent capture here my friend, Good sharp detail and excellent colour saturation, nice white framing enhaces the shot well.

TFS kind regards Helen

Great idea for a silhouette Allen.
I love the warm colors and the various smatterings of clouds.
Well placed chimney in the frame.
Nice work.
- Vincent

Really wonderful work, here, mate! ;) I like both versions but I prefer the one you posted because it's more luminous. Great job, Allen!
p.s. Thank you!

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  • wieyos Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1094 W: 43 N: 2059] (9118)
  • [2008-07-21 19:23]

Hi Allen,

a nice vertical view giving a full perspective of the chimney as a silhouette against a beautiful skyscape. well done.


very nice composed shot Allen

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1320 W: 31 N: 1634] (9994)
  • [2008-08-03 13:16]

Hi Allen

I like this industrial silhouette against that amazing sky. Nicely framed and gorgeous colours



Stroing silhouettes in this image Allen. An excellent POV to make the most of the height of the chimney and the well coloured sky. This version for me, the black frame gives too much black,

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