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cloister
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Copyright: carlos feldman (karl) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 163 W: 66 N: 62] (986)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-01-18
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Cannon PowerShot A530
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/15 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-01-18 16:51
Viewed: 1572
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
a strange thing, a very tranquil cloister in ther middle of buenos aires hurried downtown. at afternoon time is particularly quiet. is one of the few spanish origin buildings sitill remaining
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To AndroK: thank you very much for youir commentkarl 1 01-19 02:42
To rintile: muchas graciaskarl 1 01-19 02:40
To jason_vevoda: thanks for your commentkarl 1 01-19 02:36
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Carlos, una perfecta toma en perspectiva, buen color y enfoque, felicitaciones.

Use of light gives the impression of B&W. I would like to see this in a B&W and play with the shadows/levels a little. Lines and repetition yield a visibly interesting shot. Some contrast/noise could be managed better (I don't know if this is due to the uploading process). Great shot! I know that sometimes you just run across a shot like this without your tripod, but if you have one, shoot it again with a f/8 or so.

Hi Carlos...
Nice [email protected] shot with nice tones...
Beautiful composition...
Regards...
Andro

  • Great 
  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2010-01-19 7:38]

Hi Carlos
Great perspetive and composition with a perfect graphism, a superb light and sharpness, and a wonderful depth and focus.
Best regards, mb

Hola Carlos, it´s weird but there´s a lot of noise in that image, there´s daylight and you used a wide aperture and a very slow speed of 1/15 sec... I gues an ISO 100 or 200.
There´s also motion blur (due to the slow speed and no tripod I guess)
The composition is interesting, i like it, the long white porch with the black door at the end and the light coming from the outside.
In b&w would work as well, maybe better because the colours here are not main, but the volumes and lights yes.
Galder

  • Great 
  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2010-01-21 12:27]

the quality of the picture could be better ,but the atmosphere is fine Carlos.

jan

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