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BW March Self Portraits


BW March Self Portraits
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Copyright: Renata Souza (resouzaesouzaaa) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 20] (769)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-03-29
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D40 DSLR, Nikkor 18-55 AFS
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/5 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-06-05 11:54
Viewed: 1771
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just a BW self portrait.
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  • WTS Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 231 W: 52 N: 275] (1434)
  • [2009-06-05 12:08]

Renata - like the overall effect in this, choice of B&W and your white bg.
Your choice of position and crop work very well.

only suggestion would be having the eyes a bitter sharper in detail, but not always easy when doing this type of shot.

TFS
Wayne

well done self
excellent for a B&W : the stripped clothes ^^
jc

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  • Gasleb Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 77 W: 32 N: 152] (2219)
  • [2009-06-05 12:22]

Hi!Renata ,
Great self portrait in B&W I like it , composition and focus is good Bravo! Very nice work !
Tfs
Gaston

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  • mcnk Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 11 N: 88] (747)
  • [2009-06-05 12:26]

Good composition...very 'Goth".
I do think that the lack of depth on the face gives an overexposed 'washed out' feel. No cheekbone detail on what is clearly a very pretty face. Detail on the earrings really helps this shot and rescues it from being too extreme in terms of contrast.
Stripes work well and I love the way the stripes accentuate the creases in the garment.
Great idea!
Mike

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2009-06-05 17:01]

Olá Renata,

Um belo auto retrato em P&B.
Parabéns e abraços,
Sergio

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665)
  • [2009-06-05 17:02]

hi Renata

It looks very much washed-out and overexposed to me as the nose has little feature and the face too white as the same in the neck, hands and BG. The sharpness is not on the face but more on earrings, so it is a focus problem. Crop of the hand at right.

But overall this is a nice self portrait and the expression is superb. You are a pretty model.

tfs, bill

well.. Renata.. wonderful self portrait in b&w! you are gorgeous here!!
my compliments
ciao Marco

Beautiful image, Renata. Muito linda! :)

Like the high contrast B&W
maybe little unsharp overall
TFS

Hello Renata!
Very beautiful auto-portrait in blac and white!
You are pretty!
Best regards!
Lili

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