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Copyright: Piotr Kubic (Peeotr) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 374 W: 146 N: 328] (2322)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10-06
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Canon Powershot S1 IS
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-06 18:48
Viewed: 2698
Favorites: 8 [view]
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Each day I leave my house, beginning the next small step of my life with small hope - for something... The challenge is to perceive those little things which make today - THIS day, the one that will never happen again. Which make the little hope comes true.

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To Suh: I like your comment & motion blurPeeotr 4 11-02 08:50
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There's a tale told here. I love each pic and together they're even more. Good use of slight changes in colour. Well done Piotr!

I love it! Each one of these photos is beautiful. They look like really old photos, a definite part of history. The photo on the left is my favourite one, with the train just in the fog. And your choice of colours is great. Each of these photos is worthy of being posted seperately, but together the impact is much greater.
Congratulations Piotr!

Your perspective on all three shot's is great, and the change in tones form shot to shot is excellent. I particularly like the middle shot of the train passing by, and how you desaturated everything but the moss in the middle of the railroad tie.

I love it !!
great colors (even the second)
A excellent triptyque

Each of these photos deserves a critique. The first one I like because of the man walking alone into the unknown. The second because of the motion of the train. The third one because of the clarity of the bolts and the spider's web. The fourth one because of the mist and the train in the far distance. I commend you highly for presenting them in this wonderful collage. Very good presentation. Excellent work, Peeotr. The tone of colours chosen are very good.

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  • yttt Gold Star Critiquer [C: 263 W: 9 N: 3] (2127)
  • [2004-10-07 10:42]

mozna by pomyslec, ze w polsce tryptyki maja wziecie, ;)

excellent excellent depth on the two side images
excellent depth in the note too
not only do we get a free photo class at TL - but some philosophy too
as an art - photography can illustrate many things - emotion, documentary, sociological or political commentary
the "Trek" photo sites lend themselves well to these possibilities for those people who utilize this opportunity
the green of life is well-preserved in the center photo
was the train in the middle photo moving
or did you create the motion blur
i have a B&W compo of train tracks that i must now post...
...before too long...

This is one is really good - clear, poetic and special (dis)use of color.

hummm,i like your work here,
i preper trains to other transportions because it take time and i have lots of resting time and to think...but u r right,following the rail trail,u will never know what would happened next,the future takes on unknown but hopes....
the atmosphere u created was perfect,and the perpective....

Hi Piotr, I think I can relate at these photos in someway or another. I'm hoping for something that might alter my life also...Regards,Flo

This compostions is really great. Each photo has a story. Each photo has a treatment. I like very much your work here. Colors, sharpeness, details are all very well done.

Added to my favorites...

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  • cs-ist (14)
  • [2004-10-30 18:48]

Very good composition!
I love all the three photos!
The colour cast choosen for each one of them is very good! They combine very well.
Thanks for sharing some ideas!

Great text.. great shot! =) I really like this collage! Superb work!!

Patrick J

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  • walrus (130)
  • [2004-11-16 17:08]

Simply superb!!! I agree with clovestar they are all brilliant! looking at these pictures, they are telling me something!!! you`re deep man! Excellent work!!!

WWooowww.....composition magnifique....tout est beau ici!
Ca vallait vraiment la peine de nous partager ces instants du quotidien.
Tres fort....

Hi Piort,
Nice one good idea and nice tones.


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