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mini vs taller


mini vs taller
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Copyright: Azeem Mohammad (Bichoo) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 255 W: 4 N: 24] (670)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-09-23
Categories: Experimental
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-09-23 12:56
Viewed: 1323
Points: 21
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i have tried to make my mini model taller by putting her taller sister behind. i have also tried to focus both sisters.

tell me how was this experiment?
your comments are very nice always i like them because this is how i learn more.

thank you.

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Hello Azeem,
Interesting idea, the effect shows well!
The little one behaves like a pro model...
However here it is a bit of a problem when you put your subjects right in the middle of the frame, personally I'd try another cropping here and go closer on the subjects!
Just try it out and you will see what I mean...
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1816 W: 39 N: 465] (4859)
  • [2006-09-24 7:06]

Interesting perspective and a good experiment. But the picture is a bit too grainy. Nicely taken shot with good light and colors.

Thanks for sharing it, keep this spirit.

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 896 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-09-24 12:49]

beautiful capture, some suggestions: first, you can cut on the right and on the left, this is definitely a vertical pic!

and if you can try a lower angle, you can turn this one in a gorgeous BW shot!

tfs
anca

Selam Azeem,
Good idea.. :)
But i wish this photo was taken vertical inspite of horizantal!
the compositon is realy strong.

i added a workshop. i hope you like it :)

Regards,
Cihan Selcuk Eksi

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  • exenta Gold Star Critiquer [C: 424 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-09-27 11:56]

Estupendo retrato de madre hija
original la situación de ambas y el escenario.
Saludos

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  • anton Gold Star Critiquer [C: 365 W: 0 N: 0] (16)
  • [2006-09-28 13:10]

Hola Azeem, esta foto es bella, felicidades.

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  • babett (72)
  • [2006-09-30 15:12]

hola.. gracias por tu opinion :) me alegro mucho de que te hayas fijado en la fotografia hecha por mi.. supongo, depues de haber visto tus fotografias que te agrada fotografiar a los ninos, es un tema muy agradecido..
Kasia

Apart from the other advice, I think the pic will have more effect if you go down by sitting down or by lying down... a more dramatic point of view...
Good background for this pic.

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  • jasp Gold Star Critiquer [C: 419 W: 1 N: 7] (10)
  • [2006-10-06 7:52]

how many models have you got Azeem jej e? the work is very well. Saludos a Barcelona.

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  • iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 106 W: 29 N: 112] (610)
  • [2006-11-08 8:30]

Hi, nice experiment, I really like the idea! I prefer the vertical format, like in the workshop.

Also if I could make another suggestion, maybe try having your models stand so they are not facing straight toward the camera. You could have them each turn sideways a little and turn their heads to look at the camera, or they could even both look toward the center or toward the outside edges of the picture. There are many interesting possibilities to play with.

Thanks for sharing!

Erin

Hoo I didn't saw that one with good attention at first :)
It definitively the one i prefer!
The relation between two models, the perspective... The lines who give a great power and the way they are in opposition with the lines of the background give them more punch!
Bot beware there is not a bull in the arena! The little girl wear red... Olé :)

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  • Enric Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 560 W: 51 N: 554] (6447)
  • [2007-01-15 13:29]

Original composición. Yo habría puesto a la pequeña detrás, a una distancia que en la fotografía pareciera igual de alta que su hermana mayor, y en blanco y negro.

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