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#87/ Patrycja

#87/ Patrycja
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Copyright: Peter Motzart (motzart) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 130 W: 8 N: 0] (2127)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-05
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Olympus E-20
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-10-10 19:16
Viewed: 10111
Points: 11
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Very nice picture with good composition but i think the colors is not very good.

Hi Peter, unlike Mohammad, I like the colours here. Sharpness and details are all good too. I only have one problem with it - the subject is too centred, so I have done a WS to show you what I mean. So apart than that the composition is good, TFS

Hello Peter,
Interesting portrait, very well accomplished. I like the composition, the pink on her clothes contrasting the grey in the background. Good colours. I agree with Janice about the subject being to centered.

ladne pod wzgledem technicznym.
ale poza modelki jest wg mnie sztuczna.
Piotrek, pomysl tez nad innym podpisem, ten jakis taki za duzy.

Buena escena
que veo en B y N

Buena fotografia, coincidio en el comentgario anterior, seria bueno un acercamiento y en B/N.

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