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Copyright: Laura Cee (laura4) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 24] (123)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-04-21
Categories: Artwork
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-21 18:25
Viewed: 2160
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Trying to learn how to use my camera and this came out of the many photos for today.
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To dbp: the simple oneslaura4 3 07-26 21:22
To juanjo: Thank Youlaura4 1 05-22 20:54
To salil: Twigs.laura4 1 05-04 19:50
To deblink: I see ...laura4 1 05-03 23:57
To maleentjeh: Just one of those thingslaura4 1 05-03 23:55
To karith: Twig huntinglaura4 1 04-29 01:05
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carry on laura, you are startin' just wright. good framing and motiv. it's just missing a litle touch on the highlights and shadows. paulo.

Well done study in b&w.

Good perspective and POV (point of view).
Very good capture

Your practicing gave you some good results in this image, Laura. I like the way the light draws our eyes into the image. It also gives definition to the roundness of the twigs. The brackets are an interesting element to see, adding variation to the lines and perspective. Best of all, I suddenly want to go out and collect myself some bunches of twigs:)))

Hi Laura,
Keep it up, maybe could be sharpened a touch more and could have perhaps got a bit more shadow in at the left hand side. Nice one anyway, good work.

That's the way to do it Laura, learn to get the ins and outs of your camera and experiment.

Well done!


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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 17 N: 295] (2116)
  • [2007-05-04 12:04]
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Interesting image. Why are twigs kept that way? Do you use any enhancing software? Perhaps it could be improved by illuminating the ends of the bunches and in other ways too.
Anyway, these are suggestions for betterment ... what you have tried is pretty commendable. Keep trying.

hello Laura

your composition is simple but nice due to the symetry of the subjets and the lines+

BW suits very well

the wall is a little over exposed

nice shot


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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 9 N: 92] (4132)
  • [2007-07-20 6:07]
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hi Laura
this is very creative shot
great pov and composition

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  • Benok Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 12] (115)
  • [2008-09-29 3:52]

what a interesting concept and subject you have here laura and i like the outcome of this picture. Congrats and keep posting nice picture like this.:)


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