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Copyright: Francois DORMOY (dormoy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 4 N: 99] (499)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1988-08
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon 801, Nikor70-210mm f4-5.6
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Horses of the world [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-03-21 20:44
Viewed: 2187
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This picture was taken in California, near Concorde, which is Northeast of San Francisco.
The land was dry which means that the grass was yellow. A few horses were standing near a tree and I found this composition quite attarctive. having the tree on the upper right corner and the horses spread in the bottom part of the picture, and a diagonal line made up of a bright area in the grass in the middle of the picture, separating the tree from the horses.

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This is nice composition and coliurs but you use big zoom and loose some sharpnes.
Maybe use of some filter to make artistic will help. I'll do a WS .

Hi Francois,
yes, the composition is perfect. The sharpness is not the best, but the mood of the picture is more important, in my opinion. The golden spot of the old grasses is a great catch.
Let's play with it in the workshop.

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