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Fashion
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Copyright: Yasir Nisar (maxloxton) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 138 W: 2 N: 120] (2835)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-02
Categories: Experimental, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 20D
Exposure: f/4, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): trekks' favorites 1 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-03 17:34
Viewed: 2079
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just checking my new 85mm F1.8 Lens doing this fashion shoot.

Comments/Critics welcome
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very nice portrait shot. She looks really pretty in this shot.

tfs
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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1672 W: 16 N: 832] (15528)
  • [2007-10-03 18:02]

I would just love to be able to do a portrait like this. Very beautiful! Excellent color. Very good detail. And also a good expression. TFS

Hi Yasir..nice portrait..the blue background with the pink outfit work very well. The composition is very pleasing.

Roger

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 3 COLORS - 2

Average: 2.86

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 7 N: 1012] (5621)
  • [2007-10-03 19:28]
  • [2]

salam alekum yasir :)

first of all, had the girl not been resting against the bamboo sticks, i would'nt have commented on this photo at all :)

i am more than pleased to see the very nice expression from the girl, which shows that she was comfortable during the photoshoot :) congrats :)

secondly, the colors, very vibrant and nice :) and this is a very good composition, i don't know if you cropped it :)

congratulations on the new 85mm lens, you will love it :) stick to it for a while and you won't regret using it :)

muhammad muhsin

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  • japiey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1253 W: 75 N: 2365] (9460)
  • [2007-10-03 22:17]

Hello Yasir.

Good shot, nice expressions.
The composition feels energetic.
Salutes.

jean paul

Hi Yasir,
impressive reult for a trial
Karl

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665)
  • [2007-10-15 12:02]

great skin tone

TFS
Bill

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  • moody Gold Star Critiquer [C: 115 W: 1 N: 1] (51)
  • [2007-10-18 4:08]

its more than a checking of the lens, you captured it very well. good pic and nice colors.
cheers, moody

Nice Portrait, and beautiful model.

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