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Danša Arabe


Danša Arabe
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Copyright: Veruska Deschamps (Veruska) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 6] (100)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-02-27
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-W7
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/40 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-24 13:39
Viewed: 2122
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Curso de Danša ┴rabe - SŃo Paulo - SP - Festa de Formatura das danšarinas. esta foto Ú a final onde todas as turmas se uniram para a ˙štima danša.
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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2572 W: 237 N: 6132] (24044)
  • [2007-10-26 14:06]

Hello Veruska
In all honesty, this image strikes me as a family snapshot and little else. The heads of the audience are in the way, cutting off the feet of some of the dancers, the focus seems to be on the heads instead of on the action so that your main subjects are too soft and there's too much going so that we can't rest our eyes anywhere.
I would suggest that you st your camera to focus on the subject in the centre instead of on the closest object, which is what it is doing now. Even an automatic can be reset that way.

The one super thing about this image is that it has great colours
TFs
silke

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