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Kites
Photo Information
Copyright: Marylou Lorenzini (Marylou) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 903 W: 67 N: 2735] (12817)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09-17
Categories: Event
Camera: Canon PowerShot S50
Exposure: f/4.9, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-04-29 9:10
Viewed: 1990
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Photo from the International Festival of kites in Dieppe (Normandy)
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Redrubin: :o)))Marylou 1 05-20 01:23
To Silvio2006: Silvio :o)))Marylou 1 09-13 14:29
To gunershot: Thanks Guner :o)Marylou 1 07-14 12:08
To izmirli: Thanks Gurkan :o)Marylou 1 07-03 07:40
To Freddie: Thanks Freddie :o)Marylou 1 06-08 16:57
To ose: :)Marylou 1 10-14 14:44
To Ivan: Merci :o)Marylou 1 09-23 14:31
To juanjo: Thanks !Marylou 1 08-18 15:30
To aydindoruk: :-)Marylou 1 08-08 19:02
To okcTdawg: HelloMarylou 1 04-30 04:02
To maleentjeh: workshopMarylou 1 04-29 17:32
To Maru: Hello !Marylou 1 04-29 17:28
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Hi Maryline, welcome to TL. I like this picture a lot. I thought a different view might be fun too, so I made a workshop for you.

I hope you like it.

Marleen

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  • Maru Gold Star Critiquer [C: 471 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-04-29 14:40]
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Hi Maryline,
beautiful shot of this nice kites. I really like the art desing and the colors.. made a nice compo wiht the blue sky!
Well done and welcome to TL!
Marisa

This is cool. I like the simplicity of this picture. Absolutely nothing to distract. Beautiful, vivid colors. Good catch. Welcome to TL. Glad you're a part. Looking forward to seeing more.
Terry

bonjour Maryline.
Les cervolants occupent une belle ligne oblique, les couleurs bleues se différencient bien, les cervolants sont bien détaché, un beau contraste.
C'est une belle photo où l y a de la recherche.
jp

very nice photo and colours
thanks

hello Marylou

nice photo+ sharpness is ok, and also colours

congratulations

jjo

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  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 365 W: 110 N: 268] (3865)
  • [2006-09-23 8:43]
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Bonjour Marylou,

Vous aimez les couleurs contrastées, je comprends votre intérêt pour les cerfs-volants. J'en fais depuis 5 ans et parcourt les Festivals au Québec. Une de mes photos représente 'ailleurs un de mes c.v. aux Iles-de-la-Madeleine.
J'aime bien la complémentarité des nuances de bleu dans votre photo. Si je peux me permettre, un cadrage incluant les queues complètes et positionnant les cerfs-volants de l'extrème haut à gauche jusqu'à l'extrème bas à droite aurait été plus complet. Ou alors un cadre dans lequel viendrait mourir les queues des c.v.. Idéalement lse deux (composition complète et cadre)!
D'ailleurs le workshop de cette photo avec le cadre la met en valeur.

Au plaisir !


Ivan

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  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 442 W: 0 N: 18] (5420)
  • [2006-10-14 14:37]
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Hi Maryline
Nice shot. Good colours, sharpnes, light and POV.
Well done

osse

Hi Maryline! Lovely colors and close framing showing the art details of the kites. TFS,
Freddie :)

merhaba dear maryline
wonderful blue colours and composition.
well done my friend.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hi Maryline,
Swimming on the sky.
Excellent composition.
Nice colours.
I love it .
M.D.Seyfettin Güner.

Ciao Marylou, dopo aver visto la tua duecentisima, mi è presa la curiosità di vedere la tua prima, è un po' piccolina come formato ma si vede subito che l'hai scattata tu, deliziosi colori ed elegante composizione, semplice e bella, con grande nitidezza, son passati più di due anni da questa foto e capisco di essere un po' inm ritardo, ma spero che accetterai il mio "benvenuta su TL", grazie per aver postato tante foto che danno allegria e riempono di colore anche le serate più grigie, brava,
Baci
Silvio

Hi Maryline
welcome on TL!!!
Ahahahh
I m happy to look at your first one
beautiful like lots of yours
well
have nice day

Lucio

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