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performers at d Park


performers at d Park
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Copyright: cris go (crisgotiny) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 541 W: 0 N: 327] (3826)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-06-09
Categories: Event
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-10 5:18
Viewed: 1118
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just try shooting dancing partners at the park. I decided to convert my shot to b&w to focus on the performers.

I erased the mic below the skirt using the clone tool.I find it difficult to change the background so I retain the image as is. Hope this is much composed photograph of performers.

cris(",)

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Hi Cris!
Wonderful pair. Nice scene. Good POV. Original composition. Beautiful shot.
Cheers!

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
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Hello Cris
Your composition of these dancers against a backdrop which looks very modern, has the look of the 50s movies.
A bit of a shame that you aimed your focus a bit high as a bit lower and you would have gotten the feet.
Nevertheless it is still a good shot.
Dot

I think this one works nicely Cris, the dancers stand out well enough against the background. The sharpness and detail here are fine too.
Good job
Rew

Hi Cris,
Nice sharp image with good tonal range and contrast. Good details and a wonderfully timed shot. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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