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Good bye my Dear
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Copyright: Arindam Pramanik (Arindam_1984) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 42 W: 4 N: 39] (245)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-22
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D 40, Nikkor 18-55mm AF-S DX f3.5-5.6
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Arindam's fev...Sun Set or Sun Rise [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-16 4:34
Viewed: 2661
Points: 41
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi TL Members..

This is my first post in TL...Sunset is always my fav. subject..I like the colour variation....

I have taken this pic from Lava,a small village in Darjeeling, northern West Bengal ,India....the cloud made that ambience more interesting...

Thanx for viewing this pic... Hope u like this


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Beautiful sky..My congratulations.

Very nice. I like how it seems you are above the clouds. I think I might have cropped out the cable, but that would result in the sun being too far over the right. I don't know, any way, thanks for sharing.

Welcome to Trek Lens, Arindam
This is a fabulous picture with which to start your adventure on TrekLens. The sun is very nicely placed in the frame and the colours are superb. The one thing I think I might do is to clone out the cable on the left, as I will do for you in a workshop. But for a first posting this is really wonderful. I hope to see lots more postings from you....

A few tips to make TrekLens easier and more fun:
- Read ABOUT (and FAQ)!
- Always write more than 4 lines of NOTES, just as you have done here. You can use them to explain more of the process and/or your motivation. That allows members to give you points for usefulness and gives them a chance to learn more too!
- Each time you post a picture, take the time to visit at least 10 pictures in the Gallery to write a critique of the works of other photographers. Observing (and critiquing) the successes and errors of other members make for great opportunities to learn!
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I am sure that these ideas will help you make the most of your stay on the site!!
TFS (Thank-you For Sharing)

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 733 W: 61 N: 1257] (7137)
  • [2008-07-16 5:17]
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Hi Arindam
A very dramatic capture of the sunset from high abve. The colors are just terrific and the sea of clouds of great beauty.
Welcome to TL with this wonderful composition

The colors are oversaturated and the line on the right hand corner draws too much attention not belonging to the scene.
Agree with Silke's comment.
Anyway, you are very welcome to TL and we hoep to see more of your postings here.

Welcome to Treklens Arindam,

I agree with Silke on the cable dear Arindam. But the rest, as an overall composition, this is just wonderful. Love the clouds formation and its color. Looking forward for more photos from you.

Kind Regards,

The colors of this photo are magical, and creates a calm environment!!!

But there is a cable to the right that deserved a crop.


Hi Welcome on this crazy TL
lot of wishes for your new adventure
good shot and colors

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  • datis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 104 W: 4 N: 30] (642)
  • [2008-07-16 10:23]
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Hi Arindam,

Welcome to TL (TrekLens),
It's so dreamy shot with good colors and very good composed.

I agree with Silke's workshop, remove the cable makes an improve picture.


Bonjour Arindam
Superbe ciel avec ces nuages qui voilent le soleil,jolies couleurs
Ambiance de détente

Hello Arindam,
Wecome to TrekLens.What an amazing first photo.I likr this atmosphere.TFS.


Hi Arindam,
Welcome to Treklens. What a beautiful first post, fantastic colours from this sunset. You look like you were up in the clouds taking this. Cable is a bit distracting but others have said this and that you can clone it out.

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  • cbcs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 70 W: 2 N: 115] (1139)
  • [2008-07-16 14:19]
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Welcome to Treklens Arindam!

Wonderful sunset, very mysterious!


Hi Arindam,
Beautiful atmosfera,beautiful photo.
Best regards,

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  • rigz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 0 N: 82] (1091)
  • [2008-07-17 23:20]
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Hi Arindam,

Fantastic shot of sunset. Beautiful skies with amazing scenery.
Great efforts,

Geoffrey Bin Ramji

Hi Arindam, welcome on TL, fascinating sunset with fantastic warm colors, great composition with beautiful clouds, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

Hi Arindam,

Welcome to TL from me, too. You start with a great and unique photo (well, except for the cable on right...), I really like the color combination on it. Perfect saturation, too, the whole pic's having a mysterious atmosphere. MF (My Friend), I can only say: bravo!

I see Silke helped You with giving very useful advices. I give one, too: all of us are grateful for receiving great comments or constructive critiques. Don't waste Your time with sending millions of 'thank you's to everyone who writes about Your images through forum discussions, rather respect those people with honestly critiquing / commenting their images.

All the best to You, greetings from Hungary, László

Hi Arindam,

Inspired, i am like superman when i saw your post, its great sunset, great moment you share here in TL.


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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2538 W: 70 N: 4788] (22221)
  • [2008-07-24 13:39]

Welcome to Trek Lens, Arindam..!

It's great pleasure to see all your photos.
Very nice, beautiful compositions and colors.
Superb postings including this one, which is excellent...
Well done...
Rgd. George

Hi Arindam!
For a first shot, it's an amazing one!
The colors of fire, the silhouette of the trees in the foreground, and the clouds or fog over the forest!!!

I like your photos. Sunsets are always nice. I would remove the black line (cable) using PhotoShop if you can.

God Bless,

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 624 W: 0 N: 993] (4864)
  • [2008-09-15 20:28]

Hello Arindam,
a very beautiful sky with great lovely colours. Very stunning sunset. Well composed with great clouds.


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