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Kim - fashion shoot


Kim - fashion shoot
Photo Information
Copyright: Kevin Whitcomb (eyesofmanDotOrg) Silver Note Writer [C: 0 W: 0 N: 12] (163)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-11 10:10
Viewed: 2296
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just so you guys don't stop wanting to look at my pictures because they're all depressing, I'm uploading some of my commercial work too.
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To atomas59: you're incredibly negative personeyesofmanDotOrg 7 12-26 15:14
I guess this picture ain't not as bad.atomas59 1 12-26 11:18
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Hello Kevin ,

Definitely, quite a change from your previous posts. Nothing negative to say about this lovely lady. The reds are superb, and your title, despite I find its fairly big works fine. Looking like a collector card presntation.

Well done.
Robert

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 788 W: 52 N: 418] (10434)
  • [2008-09-11 14:37]

hi Kevin. love her pose and lighting. Tfs

OgGie

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  • Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 59 W: 56 N: 23] (439)
  • [2008-09-11 18:47]

:),....nice shot,...no comment - professional.
Especially love color combo and the way that beauty of her eyes stand aloft.
TFS. Nenad.

Beautiful portrait of the Beauty. Good tones in red.

You're a Pro? Really? Well you'll be judge like one.
Well i hope this is not some of your finer work, cause it's not a fine work.
The eyes are soft,and the face seem some how fuzzy but not the bra. It looks like the model's got a hole on the top of the belly botton.The skin texture looks terrible. Ordinary pose, harsh lighting make her skin (bottom part) look old and dry, the use of some extra reflector would be recommended, and maybe a softer filter would be handy.

Actually, Denis makes some good points. Her face certainly is not sharp and it does look as though she has two belly buttons.

If you disagree on either of those points, I'd love to know why.

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