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Copyright: Jean Dwyer (jean11-3) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1481 W: 0 N: 3257] (16374)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-08
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sony cybershot DSC-N1
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-23 6:55
Viewed: 1322
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello everyone,a return visit to the beach at Daymer Bay, where I had previously found the rusting remains of a vessel thrown onto the rocks.

['Rusting Away' and 'Jagged Edge' were both shot from the same piece.]

I took another batch of shots, but I chose this one because of the variety of textures it offered.
Hope you like it.Thanks for looking.

PP:cropped,adjusted exposure and contrast,sharpened using unsharp mask,and resized for posting.

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To LilDii: FYIScottHale 1 11-24 17:44
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  • Great 
  • LilDii (39)
  • [2008-11-23 6:57]
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Very interesting! I like the rust a lot!

  • Great 
  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1672 W: 16 N: 832] (15528)
  • [2008-11-23 7:03]

I am also a huge fan of rust, a nice variety of colors and textures. TFS

Hi Jean,
Perfectly captured of rusty material.
Interesting event
Selahattin E

  • Great 
  • jazrr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 330 W: 77 N: 98] (2228)
  • [2008-11-23 12:09]

Hi Jean:
Very nice pov. Great colors and composition.

You have a whole picture here FULL of delicious textures! RUST has the best texture of all in my opinion! I love how you did this! is this HDR? This would ROCK in HDR! Really cool work Jean!

Hello Jean!

Great texture and nice colours!
For a more balanced composition, imho, I would suggest cropping it on bottom.

  • Great 
  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 593 W: 3 N: 545] (3785)
  • [2008-12-02 14:52]

hello Jean,
an unuasual and interesting composition.Textures is an apt title. A tactile image, almost a collage!

  • Great 
  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2008-12-04 8:09]

Hi Jean,lots of textures indeed,the remnant of the vessel
looks like a skeleton, similar to a bone structure of a large fish.



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