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Hamayun Tomb

Hamayun Tomb
Photo Information
Copyright: deepak chadha (deepratima) (45)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-22
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/4, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-11-24 7:09
Viewed: 1563
Points: 7
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Hamayun Tomb in New Delhi
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To Janice: hi Janicedeepratima 1 12-06 01:46
To jayeshbheda: hideepratima 1 12-06 01:45
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Hi Deepak. Nice attempt. Your photo needs a lot of improvement. The sky is not seen and you lost the white dome which is barely visible The composition is not well planned. Please look at some photos from Senior Treklens members like Yamataraja, Janice Dunn etc.

Namaste Deepak,
a warm welcome here on TL.
You are starting with such a wonderful building, the architecture is marvelous.
I have visited this place some year ago and you brought back nice memories in me with your shot, thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Show us more of your wonderful country!

Good capture. I would quite agree with shaukatmi.

Still good start. The image is well composed. Also it will be helpful if you can write descriptive notes to images.


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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3204 W: 262 N: 7964] (34497)
  • [2008-11-24 11:07]
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Oh, I just saw my name mentioned in Shaukatmi's critique. I'm sorry Deepak and I do not like how he mentioned my name. I started taking photos 4 years ago and this is your first posting. And even today I know I have a lot to learn.

I want to welcome you to TrekLens and I hope you do enjoy your time here. It is a good place to learn and improve your photography skills.

The building is quite outstanding, and the architecture is so striking. Seeing the people standing there shows me how large the building must be.
Thank you for sharing and keep posting

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  • Usaf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 87 N: 312] (2160)
  • [2008-11-24 14:08]

this is not Hamayun TombThis is TAJ MEHAL In Jhoom barabar Jhoom movie ABISHAKH says to Pretti Zinta that this is taj mehal.(Kidding) One of my Favorite movies.
coming back to the picture a little space from top could make it better.for now Im giving u one point. its a good start keep clicking & welcome to TL


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