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Copyright: Robert Tomczak (soulie) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 33 W: 0 N: 1] (302)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-10
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon Powershot G6
Exposure: f/2, 1/5 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): A Tribute To The Pretty Woman [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-06-10 19:04
Viewed: 5892
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 27
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  • Great 
  • BAKO Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 71 W: 11 N: 8] (748)
  • [2005-06-10 19:12]

Hello Robert,
really nice and warm :)



This is a very nicely composed portrait. I like the overall mellow cast, and how you have Magdalena off to the left. The stairs going up bring my eye back to the subject.

Welcome to TL Robert!! This is a very interesting first entry work. Great pose, wonderful light! Well done!


  • Great 
  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 445 W: 47 N: 88] (4688)
  • [2005-06-11 0:19]

Très beau portrait, la lumière, la composition et l'attitude candide de la modèle font une grande photographie:) Bravo Robert!
José A.

This is a beautiful shot Robert! The mood is very intense. I composition is nice... The thing is U could have blurred the tiles at the back a little as they are disturbing the whole scenerio... (Just that :))

To my Favs. :)

Take care.
- Hima.

Hi Robert,
Yes... she's very pretty but the photo is much more than simply your "model" (i don't like to call them models... always sound like Pro stuff)

The stairs, the geometrical rudness contrasts in perfection with her shyness and gentlenes... it seems an angel traped!


Great shot and model, I tried a workshop, hoping you dont mind.


That portrait is beautifull! She is natural and the decorum is very nice and simple.

  • Great 
  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-06-11 19:32]

Nice portrait Robert. It could stand a little noise reduction but a great point of view. B

  • Great 
  • jbate Gold Star Critiquer [C: 126 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-06-11 22:47]

Welcome to TL. You begin with a very remarkable photograph. The lighting is perfect. I also like the detail and clarity, aspects too ofter neglected. The composition I would grade "A". Good job.

  • Good 
  • Peeotr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 374 W: 146 N: 328] (2322)
  • [2005-06-12 17:03]

No i całkiem fajny portret w zwykłym miejscu... :-) Trochę przeszkadza ten słup z tyłu, z biegnącą wzdłuż niego jakąś rurą... Schody na pierwszym planie też się tak bardzo wybijają... może by obciąć...? Ale sam portret bardzo sympatyczny, dziewczyna jest OK w wyrazie twarzy i pozie

hey robert!
you seem to have very beautiful models, that are willing to be photographed for you. i'm glad that she didn't wear anything that would have blended her into the rest of the photograph.

anyway, just curious but where did you take this? it looks like a institutional building, a school or something else?


  • Great 
  • hipnoz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 90 W: 3 N: 93] (1396)
  • [2005-09-18 16:23]

another great picture Robert, you have excellents models :) great work

Bardzo ladny portret. Swiatlo z okna po lewej ladnie doswietlilo buzie dziewczyny. Widzialem to zdjecie juz chyba rok temu na innym forum (chyba DeviantArt) i tak jakos znajomo mi wygladalo to miejsce :) Czy to jest na wydziale fizyki UAM na Umultowie? Pozdrawiam :)

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