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Copyright: mark moczulski (niebieski) (55)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-18
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-11-01 15:56
Viewed: 2088
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 19
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
first pic in treklens
you can see it bigger here:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3479/4064888885_ef3a209542_b.jpg
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Hi Mark!
excellent start on tl...welcome!:)...
very nice shot...perfect clarity, nice composition...great colors on the background...
thanks for sharing
Alper

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  • KellEy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 48 N: 172] (2098)
  • [2009-11-01 16:10]

Great POV and lighting.
Very good looking model too!
Welcome to a great photo sharing site. I hope you like it here.

Very creative shot and great POV but I am not convinced about your choice to cut off the hands in the composition and had you included the hands it would have been a more complete shot. Hope to see more of your work here and welcome to TL!

cheers,

Dilshan

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  • karl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 163 W: 66 N: 62] (986)
  • [2009-11-01 16:26]
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antes que nada ¡bienvenido!

Me gusta el fondo y el motivo asi como el procesamiento.
L'astima que no se vea toda la barra ni las manos, creo que le hubiera dado mayor dramatismo

Mark, pozdrawiam on your facinating appearance on TL!
Perfect on terms of light, shadows etc.
Amazing in terms of composition.

I might agree with Dilshan about the hands… But I will not, cuz the dynamics of the image captures the eye and compensates for all possible errors. I'd rather remove the rod (the thing in the bottom right) so that there are only the man and the sky left.

a great shot for a first one,

welkomme to treck Lens,I hope you like it here,

dd, ile de la Réunion

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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 265 W: 25 N: 207] (2856)
  • [2009-11-01 21:33]

wow fantastic shot! Is this two photos merged? hope you can share some more notes... sharp and great composition! love the wide angel shot! kudos and welcome to TL! TFS

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2009-11-01 22:48]

Hi Mark...
Welcome on TL...
Nice work with so nice model...
Regards...
Andro

Hi Mark

Excelent first image here on TL. Love the muted colours in the sky and the models pose against it is fantastic. My issues with this picture is the right hand cut off and the fingers of the left hand. I feel it would have worked better if you had included the aforementioned along with a little more of the wall he used to balance from. I know I may be being super critical in this critique, however, it's only my opinion and it takes very little away from the creativity and execution used to capture this. I still think this is an excellent image with a little room for improvement.

Keep up the good work!

thisi s amazing shot too...great composition here... i agree with the others it would be perfect capture if you include the hands too otherwise its amazing shot well done bravo ..Harout.

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