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Sweet Smile, Fresh Water

Sweet Smile, Fresh Water
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Copyright: Agoes SK (wieyos) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1094 W: 43 N: 2059] (9118)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-26
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Pentax K20D, PENTAX SMC DA 18-55MM F/3.5-5.6 AL II
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/3000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-11-03 0:30
Viewed: 2052
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ani the model, in a traditional Malay dress of 'baju kebaya' was under the shade of a paper umbrella.

I think using a polariser would render a better result on the water.

Thanking you in advance for viewing and your kind words.

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Hello Agoes! Nice girl with umbrella. Nice scene. Very nice scenery. Superb light and colours. Good shot. Well done!

pleasant laugh is at everyone welcome

Hi Agoes, this is a very pleasant peaceful shot with lovely soft colours all around from the sky to dress and umbrella. The water does indeed look very fresh and clear.
Thanks for sharing,

Classic 1/3 rule for the composition. Excellent choice of f stop for the narrow DOF and that helps make your subject stand out very clearly here..
Nice diffused light too and that shows her skin tones very nicely and clearly.


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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2009-11-03 1:31]

Hi Agoes...
Nice portrait with so nice composition...
Nice moment...

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2009-11-03 1:34]

Hello Agoes

A superb decisive moment with the splashing water. Once again, the parasol makes a superb prop for the woman. Good colour & sharpness. Tfs. Bagus sekali!

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 520 W: 26 N: 1877] (12221)
  • [2009-11-03 1:48]

Wonderful portrait, Agoes!
Lovely model, beautiful colors and light.
Well done!

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,

Salam Agoes
Amazing action shot with lovely move of water in hand and beautiful smile...
with lovely sharp colors and details TFS
well done

Great composition on this one Agoes. Love the soft light too - nothing harsh here. Great that you had her splashing with her hand ..just adds a real bit of interest to the shot.

Ciao Agoes, beautiful portrait of lovely girl, wonderful composition, great effect of water in her hand, very well done, ciao Silvio

Brilliant comes to mind- the expression and timing is perfect!
This is great work and TFS!



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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2009-11-03 21:06]

Hi Agoes,
beautiful moment you catch.Really sweet..beautiful compo and colours.TFS.Necla.

HI Agoes...nice shot...well composed, nice pose, well done.


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