This lovely flower has great potential but sadly, somehow it doesn't quite work. I really would like to help and have studied it hard. Perhaps its very central position makes it lose power, or possibly the very light b/g top/right looks a little oe.
Anyway, I have done a w/s to try to counteract these possibilities. I hope you are not offended by me changing your original.
Please tell me what you think.
- pejhwak (1279)
- [2010-04-15 13:25]
Beautiful Artwork, excellent concept and idea.
Nice exposure and well presented
- eadnan2 (100)
- [2010-04-15 13:39]
very lovely shoot. Regards.
- macedonia (6699)
- [2010-04-15 14:30]
Great focus and details. In right up corner white light is bad .Other part of B/g is beatuiful.
- lilimih33 (19483)
- [2010-04-15 15:18]
Good focus, wonderful colours, nice flower!
Nice point of view and good work!
- harpya (7534)
- [2010-04-15 16:05]
Beautiful colours and fine details!
The tight framing works well to emphasis the subject,
DoF spot on isolates the delicate flower well from
- scubli (1733)
- [2010-04-16 2:48]
What a nice macro shot you're presenting us.
A nice tight crop with a fine POV.
The warm colors are very beautiful and the light conditions are well managed.
Very nice sharp details here and a wonderful shallow DoF BG.
Congrats and TFS.
Have a nice WE,
- EOSF1 (26902)
- [2010-04-16 13:56]
Hello Detlef! That's a fantastic macro! Very sharp image, great exposure and a beautiful tight crop. Well done my friend.