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Breakfast
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Copyright: Lisa Williams (lisapw1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 102 N: 1602] (8893)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-07-18
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-08-13 15:27
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Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I made some muffins for breakfast a few weeks ago.

I added highlights, contrast and cloned out a blue speck from the left corner of the photo.

Thank you for your comments, critiques, and workshops. I do appreciate them.

Lisa
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To daisydaisy: Merci beaucoup Daisylisapw1 1 08-21 14:47
To RSK: Thanks Ronlisapw1 2 08-13 16:47
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Ok Lisa

Breakfast at your place then !!! Is it a savoury Muffin.

Well detailed and nice shallow DOF

The extra bit of the other muffin is a nice touch.

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2010-08-13 15:53]
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Looks really yummy Lisa,my only suggestion for improvement,well two really,[1] add the recipe to your notes:-)
& [2] I would crop most of the background out ,about 1 inch
from the top of the muffin,as I think it would make your muffin, even more desirable,if that was possible.

Cheers

Ron

Hi Lisa
excellent close up of a muffin that looks delicious. good management of light for natural colors and clear texture.
nicely set and composed with the blurry cup at bg.
fine presentation for cookbook.
the recipe would be appreciated.
tfs
tsilla

Hi Lisa:
The only reason that this caught my attention, because I am hungry:),
I guess that makes this image accomplish its purpose, therefore it is an excellent image...
contact a muffin company to be their photographer!
TFS
David

Hi Lisa,
Hey I really think when you post a FOOD that looks this good you need to post the recipe too..:)
Nice, I like it very much not only does it look tasty its a pretty photo too!
TFS
Donna:)

Lisa,

There is the whole atmosphere of breakfast here, the muffin very much focus, the mug in the background, and another muffin, we guess.

I feel the smell of hot coffee, the smell of the cakes so appealing.
That's when a picture is successful, all sense are called
Nice work, details and light are well managed.
Congratulations Lisa and thank you for sharing

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