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The Tree Of Scarlet Berries

The Tree Of Scarlet Berries
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Copyright: Tsilla Nahari (tnahari) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1381 W: 259 N: 4365] (26007)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-19
Categories: Food, Nature
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-09-23 2:02
Viewed: 1867
Points: 8
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The Tree Of Scarlet Berries

The rain gullies the garden paths
And tinkles on the broad sides of grass blades.
A tree, at the end of my arm, is hazy with mist.
Even so, I can see that it has red berries,
A scarlet fruit,
Filmed over with moisture.
It seems as though the rain,
Dripping from it,
Should be tinged with colour.
I desire the berries,
But, in the mist, I only scratch my hand on the thorns.
Probably, too, they are bitter.

by Amy Lowell


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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-09-23 2:37]

Hi Tsilla,
A lovely flourishing tree full of red berries.
A nicely composed picture with that golden/yellow cast which I like.
You managed to create a beautiful frame.
Well done.
My best regards,

Francis Xavier

Hoi Tsilla,
A superb peace of work !
Great colors and details.

The only remark I have is the fact that the image is visible in the border, which is normally nice, but in this case it is disturbing (upper side I mean).
It results in a un-natural look in this way. Maybe due to the white parts in it.

Boa tarde Tsilla,
A shot nicely done. Beautiful yellow BG (but I agree with Joop about framing)
It seems a romantic paint.
Best wishes,

Hi Tsilla,
Beautiful branches of red scarlet berries tree nicely presented and composed with great colors and light,
Excellent point of view and detail,
picture very sharp and clear,
well done.

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