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Big Crash


Big Crash
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Copyright: Jan Stillar (Jan9376) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 478 W: 69 N: 354] (3539)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-08
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment, Action
Camera: Fujifilm Finepix S1000
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Bruce Trail [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2010-11-10 17:45
Viewed: 2092
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
After hiking an hour from the car on the Bruce Trail my friend attempts clinging to the rocks as the whirling waves crashes over her - it was quite amusing to watch...

PP: Corrected horizon tilt, cropped, increased contrast, framed.

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  • Teresat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3410 W: 96 N: 3821] (15934)
  • [2010-11-10 17:52]

Olá Jan
I like the scene very much, and you catch it in " a sapient way".
there is so much energy that come from the scene...I ask my self how it will look if it was a b/w version...
I like it
um abraço
teresa

Hi, Jan. The timing, composition and the energy captured is remarkable. Good exposure, sharpness and presentation.

Hello Jan,

This shot is such good fun!
It is really well timed with a fine sense of movement and dynamism.
The use of pebbles in the f/g is a good compositional aid.
The horizon is a little tilted but no big deal. I used to do it all the time and was chastised about it such that it become ingrained to look for it in other's shots.

Have a good w/e,
Bev :-)

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 633 W: 11 N: 1379] (8213)
  • [2010-12-03 3:09]

Hello Jan,very good timing,great action perfectly composed. Very good POV, clear details.
Regards Rose

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