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Vintage V
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Copyright: Irene Jeongco (VisualArtist_99) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 56 W: 20 N: 88] (487)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-08-07
Categories: Event, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Canon 1000D, Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6, Jessops ULTRA VIOLET FILTER
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-10-18 23:13
Viewed: 2348
Points: 10
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This is an upclose portrait shot of our male vintage model, Ron.
Ron really is a nice model to work with. He knows how to project well and show emotions we would want to see when he shoot.
I believe he's good at it because he's a part of the Little Theatre in school. (^_^)

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He does do well as a portrait model, a good presence on camera.

I still don't like your signatures in your photos, I don't think they're necessary.

Otherwise though - very nice, good lighting.


Bom dia Irene,
Your Vintage series is a success for me and not just by the qualities of Ron as a model, but by competent use you make of the photography studio.

I don't mind the watermark but hey, your male model is outstanding!

A bit of observation:
1. Though this seems to be a soft classic image, I would love to see more sharpness on the eyes especially for up-close shots. The eyes will make teh image more captivating.
2. Some digital noise visible, you can use a noise reduction program to suttle the portrat a bit and apply just a little bit of sharpness.
3. The bow is a bit skewed drawing my attention to it rather than on the great projecton of the model.

These are just minor observations from me.

Overall, I love the emotiona, POV and the lightng.
Keep posting and see more of your shots in teh next days to come.


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  • I-Bar Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 81 W: 17 N: 167] (556)
  • [2011-10-19 9:26]

Hello Irene-

I like the soft shot here. Ron's bow tie is askewed (picky on me) but I still like this image. Well done and cheers!


Hi Irene..nice portrait. Your light and tones are very nice and your subject has a nice pose.

Well done.


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