Vintage V

Critiques [Translate]

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• rewshearer (24649)
• [2011-10-19 2:05]

He does do well as a portrait model, a good presence on camera.

I still don't like your signatures in your photos, I don't think they're necessary.

Otherwise though - very nice, good lighting.

Rew

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• mesquens1 (40829)
• [2011-10-19 2:37]

Bom dia Irene,
Your Vintage series is a success for me and not just by the qualities of Ron as a model, but by competent use you make of the photography studio.
Compliments.
R.

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• PhilBell (342)
• [2011-10-19 3:49]

I don't mind the watermark but hey, your male model is outstanding!

A bit of observation:
1. Though this seems to be a soft classic image, I would love to see more sharpness on the eyes especially for up-close shots. The eyes will make teh image more captivating.
2. Some digital noise visible, you can use a noise reduction program to suttle the portrat a bit and apply just a little bit of sharpness.
3. The bow is a bit skewed drawing my attention to it rather than on the great projecton of the model.

These are just minor observations from me.

Overall, I love the emotiona, POV and the lightng.
Keep posting and see more of your shots in teh next days to come.

Cheers!!!

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• I-Bar (556)
• [2011-10-19 9:26]

Hello Irene-

I like the soft shot here. Ron's bow tie is askewed (picky on me) but I still like this image. Well done and cheers!

Rolando

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• rminkow (34772)
• [2013-04-03 22:42]

Hi Irene..nice portrait. Your light and tones are very nice and your subject has a nice pose.

Well done.

Roger