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Under the Rain


Under the Rain
Photo Information
Copyright: Feyza Ramazanoglu (FYZRMZ) Silver Note Writer [C: 9 W: 1 N: 38] (415)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-07-29
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D610, Tamron SP 24-70mm f/2.8 Di VC USD
Exposure: f/4, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2014/08/15 Under The Rain [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2014-08-15 12:39
Viewed: 1485
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken at Milano,
The rain was heavy..
Many people were running from the rain, but this lady, she was enjoying the rain with the help of her Yellow umbrella.
regards
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Great shot here, Feyza.
I love the fact you've caught the subject walking into the frame, but looking out of frame at the same time.

The warm tones of the light reflections, matching the yellows of the umbrella, the mannequin's hat and sandy colour of the building pillars are perfect for the mood of the shot.
Brilliant smile from the subject too. The motion blur on her leg coupled with the bag strap falling off her shoulder shows she is at a rapid pace to get under cover, adding excitement to the shot.

Shame about the foreground distraction, but a really easy fix with the clone tool.
I did a couple of workshops, one of which has cropped out the distraction and with a border added, the other is a simple clone repair without border.
I think the cropped and bordered shot shows a slightly better composition, having the subject more central in frame rather than walking out of shot too much, but it's a personal preference and takes nothing away from your excellent shot.

Great work, and thanks for such a happy shot.

M

Hi Feyza,
The outstanding yellow of the umbrella tells the story and portreys the theme well. The matching yellow cap in the shop front is also rather prominent. A great entry to this weeks theme.
erwin...

Indeed lovely sunshine umbrella also a beautiful smile in the rain has been captured well done FEYZA RAMAZANOGLU

Hello Feyza,I like the way that the lady is looking across the frame and smiling despite the rainy weather.
Those two touches of yellow, from the umbrella and the hat in the shop display, really bring the picture to life.
Regards Jean.

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