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Industro Environment

Industro Environment
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Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 461 W: 121 N: 299] (4996)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-10
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Canon Powershot Pro 1
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): 70 points or more !, mwebr Favorites#2, btokaz favorites, My Favourites of Carma, Apocalyptic Futures: T45G32 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-10-11 5:02
Viewed: 4385
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 78
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Old factory in sunset.
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good work.....
the warm colour of the sunset make a strong contrast with the cold structure of the factory...
and the yellowed window seem a passage between the two parts...

Hi Carmela, You've set the contrast very good. The warm sunset vs. the gloomy old factory! Well done!

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  • jinju Silver Star Critiquer [C: 39 W: 0 N: 1] (80)
  • [2005-10-11 5:47]

The sky here is great! There is a really cool contrast between the clean, warm and bright sky and this old, dirty building. Great perspective.

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  • law Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 509 W: 75 N: 80] (1764)
  • [2005-10-11 5:51]

Nice captured. I like the perspective view. Very sharp and the colors are wonderful.

Stunning image, Carmela. Good control of perspective and astonishing colour rendition of an otherwise everyday scene. Thanks for sharing.

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  • mwebr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 141 N: 666] (3402)
  • [2005-10-11 5:57]

Now that's some aweosme photography and timing.
Great perspective shot on this very interesting building with great textures to look over and tonal ranges.
I would of cloned out the wire towards the end of the building and maybe the little thing that sits on top also underneath the mountain.
Great detail and the sunset reflection in the windows is sweet as well as just the overall sunset coloring and contrast between everything.
Such a wonderful catch and quite different. TFS.


Great architectural shot! I just love the colors reflections on the windows, as well as the perspective. Mood that you achieved is great! This is a good candidate for the "Color against gray" theme, right? ;)

Great job Carma, well done!

P.S. Što je to, Mlaka ili Delta ili nešto treće?

Marvellous urban landscape Carmela, you have really turned the old factory into a thing of beauty. The night sky is the cherry on the cake, a great touch. Terrific shot.


The pov, the colours, the mood, and the "line" of this building; everything is good. Perfect picture.


I love the color of the sky!!! waowwwwww
Excellent mood. Great Art Carmela... TFS

Hi Carmela,
The light is wonderful with its yellow/golden tones. and the depth is very good too.

Beautiful structure design. The tones are perfect. Excellent. Aloha

Great composition, great perspective, great colours, great shadows. Perfect for me.

Very nice presentation! That building look from another time and the light bring it some reconfort...

This is a terrific shot! The composition is just perfect. It was a great idea to take a pic at sunset...the contrast is wonderful.

great picture.. very warm yet cold picture.. like the reflections on the ground the most.. terrific shot.

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  • joker Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 81 W: 17 N: 45] (889)
  • [2005-10-11 11:56]

Great industrial gothic atmosphere. The lines and walls textures are strong and the reflections of the last rays of sun in the factory windows make a piercing chord.

Hi Carma,
Very cool shot! I like the diagonal composition on this. It's very strong. The yellow of the sunset against the dirty gray of the building is dramatic. Actually, it looks a little haunted. ;P Well done!

Greaat photo!
Beautiful colors!!!

very nice POV
i like the mood created by the colors
well composed shot carmela :)

Much like ropetko I'm puzzeled with where this is exactly. Nice contrasts between this ruined factory and the softnes of the sky.

hmmm carmela!
very good job again!
I like it much

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-11 14:09]

Fantastique !!!

Hi dear,
B&W mixed with bright colours of a beautiful sunset.
Great architectural shot that makes me think to your shot that won a prize !!!
The perspective is perfect, the eye goes far away following the building to get to the light ... maybe !
Congrats and kisses

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-10-11 19:14]

This is awesome Carmela. Well done. B

hello charms, always the last to see your photographs. Very beautiful prospects created by the lines for the building. The yellow tone is pleasant but I think that if the photograph had been worked only in B&W it would have given much more I think. As said my old teacher of photograph "the color little boy will destroy the photograph"

Nice perspective and composition here. Lovely effect. Excellent work!
Bivsi "Torpedo" ako se ne varam...

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  • Alexus Silver Star Critiquer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 1] (179)
  • [2005-10-12 4:50]
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Hi Carmela!

Another great picture from you....terrific lights...unbelievable diagonal...Thanks for sharing

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 62 N: 749] (5437)
  • [2005-10-12 15:47]

It is a good picture but your PP Work made it better. Unfortunately the effect of the warm sunlight carried only to the roof and window glazings.


A really pleasing graphic treatment to this. It works well.
Best wishes,

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  • Eden Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 50 N: 86] (2084)
  • [2005-10-14 14:45]

Hi Carma, great urban pic, i like the filter you have used giving it a warm feeling amongst all the concrete structure, great POV aswell...congrats...martha

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  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 506 W: 31 N: 401] (3329)
  • [2005-10-15 3:02]

Creative, artistic, striking and simply gorgeous. Great work, and a joy to view. Thank you ..... Sam


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  • Mrgud Gold Star Critiquer [C: 127 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-18 2:08]

Very nice industrial :)) Okvir mi bas ne pase jer mi ova zuta crta bode oci ali... :))) Congratulations! :)))

The sky has a poisoncolour; 'wonderfull' polution-look. I wonder what is in the ground.
Good combination in colour and materials.
Thank you Carmelea;
your gallery looks very interesting.

Hi Carmela,

Excellent shot! Great perspective and perfect tones.
Textures are very nice and everything looks very surreal..

Well done!!

take care, Stefania :))

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  • Paolo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 98 W: 0 N: 40] (511)
  • [2005-11-14 7:48]

Hi Carmela, excellent shot.
i like your work of PP on the sky.
excellent also teh POV to have a great perspective.
thanks, ciao

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2005-12-12 21:05]

One of the best industrial shot I've seen. Bravo !


This is beautiful. And meaningful.
It is like a symbolic place from a dream.
an archetype.
What is this place?

stunning photo Carma, excelelnt composition and expsoure

Unbelievable image. Awesome! Dobbie

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