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The Temptation of Adam and Eve

The Temptation of Adam and Eve
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Copyright: Daniel Camacho (hipnoz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 90 W: 3 N: 93] (1396)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-29
Categories: Mood
Photo Version: Original Version
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Date Submitted: 2005-10-24 5:17
Viewed: 3999
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 73
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In the beginning of the world, the Temptation of Adam and Eve, where cotton clouds grow up and fill the paradise cenario.
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yes, you are a very good photographer but also a very good PP designer......
I like in a special way this one

Hi Daniel,
A beautiful photograph... Well composed, and you make good use of the dramatic sky to emphasise your message! Both photographic and post processing work are flawless...
Pablo -

Lovely image
just enough of the ground showing for impact, The sky brings many emotions into mind, like to people walking on the cauldron of a volvano. fantastic..

Wonderful almost moving picture; great 'historical' and dramatical shown.
The figures attitude is composed towards the coming disaster.


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  • Carma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 461 W: 121 N: 299] (4996)
  • [2005-10-24 8:38]
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This scenography is perfect for it.
Nice idea. The clouds are powerful. Maybe too grainy in blue right part.
Lovely composition.

I like the photo and the composition. But paradise is for me less dark. Its bright and very intense in colours. But people are different. But we both like the photo that is what we have in common
Ruud Blok

Nice high contrast shot Daniel. Excellent composition. I lke the way tou croped this image.

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  • Eden Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 50 N: 86] (2084)
  • [2005-10-24 10:23]

Hi Daniel, excellent pic, i like the dramatic sky and the way the silhouttes are situated i suppose you have used some kind of blue filter which goes really well...congrats...martha

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 697 W: 36 N: 423] (3851)
  • [2005-10-24 10:48]

Very well done Daniel! Such a great speak of mood!!!! TFS


Clouds are fantastic that's true... I think i miss the begin of the story! They have clothes and i don't see the apple! I'm sorry to arrive late :)
I like the way we see just a line of land! Great "creation"

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  • redol Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 260 W: 33 N: 12] (2254)
  • [2005-10-24 14:18]

Espectacular!!! un buen título... y una mejor imagen. No te puede dejar indiferente. Un gran trabajo. Precioso blanco/negro y buen postproceso.

Very dramatic...and the mood you created is amazing. This is good work...very well thought of.

Beautiful image, Daniel. Nino

beautiful photograph
that carried through,
good color
and good work.

José Lopes

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  • fmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 81 W: 0 N: 44] (503)
  • [2005-10-24 19:57]

Uma composição realmente fora de série, a história bem enquadrada . Parabens.

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2441 W: 250 N: 873] (8693)
  • [2005-10-24 23:08]

Beautiful picture! Very dramatic sky and beautiful silhouettes ! very moody picture,well composed! Tfs! Michel

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-25 3:03]
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Un vrai petit chef d’œuvre photographique …
PS : son una o dos fotos ???


Olá Daniel,
Eu não digo? As tuas fotos são sempre uma tentação ao bom gosto e à criatividade.
É sempre um prazer apreciar o teu trabalho.
Um abraço,

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1206 W: 151 N: 655] (8171)
  • [2005-10-25 11:53]

olá Daniel!
esta foto é uma tentação para quem a vê, pois todos gostavam de tirá-la daqui e dizer que era obra sua e mostrá-la.aquelas núvens e aquelas duas silhuetas que marcam marcam presença no quadro estão demais.no mínimo excelente!
fica bem.

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 727 W: 3 N: 118] (2478)
  • [2005-10-25 17:27]

stunning, Daniel
excellent ....


Hi Daniel!
very well composed shot! silhouette of people seems cool and cloudy sky is perfect!
i like the mood of your shot! u'r good at black as blue, too ;)
thanks for sharing..
by the way your title is very good!!
zey. :)

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  • cafe Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 25] (1237)
  • [2005-10-27 18:06]

Dramatic scene and great composition . TFS , Cafe.

Maravilhosa! Adorei esta imagem! Titulo muito apropriado e as nuvens sao de fato muito expressivas. Comp esta excelente e a ideia e muito interessante.
parabens Daniel!

Tudo de bom, Stef :))

Great silhouette. I like how there is so much negative space in the sky, and very little in the foreground. Excellent composition. Amazing scene. Well done.
Sorry, but I ran out of points already.

Great shot Daniel. Wery good composed, dramatic sky, great atmosphere...

this one is great :) i like compo and tones of colour in here. regard e.

The composition is excellent, but it's more than a technically superb work. What I like most about it is the clouds and the mood that this image conveys to us, the viewers, to appreciate.
Great presentation.



Mais uma fotografia excepcional! Cada vez gosto mais do teu trabalho!

splendid phto Daniel, your sky and the silhouetes are just perfect.


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  • rosana Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 293 W: 2 N: 246] (3317)
  • [2006-01-09 11:05]

Very good sky and lvoe the position of the silhoutes!

Eve is wearing capri/rolled pants and is holding her hair up in a bun. Hmmm... but who's to say that this is not good, i.e. breaks a possible image cliche? I like that the woman is leading and both have their head down (in shame?), while I find them placed a bit too close to the left margin (think rule of thirds). Good example of the effectiveness of high contrast. Overall a strong photo.

Just incredible.....
Real delight for the eyes....
Thanks for your way to see the life....

Nice shot and very good viewpoint.
Great color and composition.
thank u for sharing.

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  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 445 W: 47 N: 88] (4688)
  • [2006-04-28 15:05]

Una pequeña obra MAESTRA:) Bravo Daniel,me encanta los tonos y sub-tonos de gris. Trabajo de luces perfecto y, enfin ...A++ :)
José Adolfo

Woooh what a great great image. Bravo and thanks for share.

bravo pour cette photo toute en puissance!

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  • iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 106 W: 29 N: 112] (610)
  • [2006-09-04 0:08]

Hi Daniel, very dramatic with these clouds and the silhouettes off to one side. Great contrast. Thanks for sharing!

Nice composition with a dramatic sky.

Muy buena el enplasamento de la pareja.


Desculpas, pero no mas :) hoy.

Beautiful title.
Love this special atmosphere, mysterious, mystical and dramatic.
Well done.
You have a very interesting gallery, I like your artistic sensitivity.

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