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United States
Title: Buildings (over)Exposed!Nikon D70
Buildings (over)Exposed! (5)
flip89 Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 45 W: 0 N: 120] (585)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-05-09 03:47:53] [1]
I made a correction of the distortion, contrating on the corner line of the "blue" building, to get the middle line straight vertically.
I also offcentered this "meeting" line cropping some more on the left part of the image.
Hope you appreciate.
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United States
Title: Shapes in the SandOlympus C-750UZ
Shapes in the Sand (13)
swallace Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 99 W: 8 N: 285] (2063)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-05-08 05:15:08] [2]
Feel that the saturation of the blue, voluntary done by Stephan, works not so well, particularly in the sand's shadow. I tried to give back the natural look of the picture, using selective color corrections.
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Canada
Title: circulationnikon coolpix 4500
circulation (8)
freddd Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 322 W: 47 N: 77] (1909)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-05-08 05:03:53] [3]
Added some luminosity. The pattern is interesting, just wished I could see it some more.
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Belgium
Title: le regard du cygne 2olympus c-740 uz
le regard du cygne 2 (4)
jmb (80)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-05-02 05:49:30] [1]
L'image originale est belle et elle n'aurait pas besoin d'être travaillée. Je fais ici un WS pour une autre interprétation uniquement.
Ici, je trouve le bec plus intéressant que le regard, que l'on ne perçois presque pas car il est dans l'ombre.
Je propose donc une autre interprétation de cette image, qui met en valeur ce bec orange.
-Désalutation sélective de l'image.
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United Kingdom
Title: Steam boilerFujifilm FinePix F601 ZOOM
Steam boiler (14)
Avigur Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 49 N: 141] (747)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-04-26 12:17:05] [1]
I played with the image to add contrast and emphased the textures of the rusted boiler.
Desaturation of the boiler, keeping the colored background intact.
Duplicated the layer and applied a blur on the new one.
Set blending mode to... humm... grrrrr don't remember! (sorry)... was just experimenting :(
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France
Title: On the road
On the road (32)
papagolf21 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 277 W: 16 N: 102] (1631)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-04-25 11:18:33] [2]
Proposition of another cropping, erasing the barrier at the lower right corner.
Correction of the horizon's tilt.
added some luminosity in shadows.
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Russia
Title: Autumn mushroom
Autumn mushroom (5)
mbravo (60)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-04-25 11:02:20] [1]
Proposition of a more dynamic composition.
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Switzerland
Title: After the forest fireEpson PhotoPC 3000z
After the forest fire (9)
ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-04-24 03:52:53]
Several months after I prepare this picture, I looked at the original version today and think it is more interesting...
Mood change...
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United States
Title: Tropical GreensCanon A80
Tropical Greens (18)
Hal (48)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-04-22 14:53:57] [1]
Just tried to enhance the composition cutting some more on the right side to place off center the vertical line of the picture.
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Switzerland
Title: Daddy
Daddy (8)
Mireille Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 3 N: 9] (327)


ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760) [2004-04-17 13:02:04] [2]
Desaturation de l'image qui présente beaucoup de rouge/majenta qui à mon avis "durcisse" l'image.
Colorisation teinté vert/bleu (il regarde la télé)
Duplication du calque de base
Filtre "Blur gaussien" sur le nouveau calque
Blending mode en "soft light".
Ajout de couverture sur le sommet de sa tête à droite.
Cadrage légèrement plus serré en haut.

Tout cela pour tenter d'adoucir un peu le portrait déjà intéressant à la base.
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