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Lolita Lempika parfum


Lolita Lempika parfum
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Copyright: Frederic CREMER (Highjah) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 160 W: 12 N: 13] (1055)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-22
Categories: Macro, Mood
Camera: Fuji FinePix E900
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): All about women [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-12-22 18:34
Viewed: 11792
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Une bouteille de parfum Lolita Lempika que j'ai prise en macro. J'ai fais le fond avec une taie de traversin. L'éclairage est constitué d'une lumière rouge, d'une bougie et d'une lumière faible d'ambiance. J'ai ensuite retouché la colométrie sous photoshop et simulé au mieux une certaine profondeur de champ, impossible à obtenir avec mon appareil compact.
Pour finir, j'ai ajouté un cadre.


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To richardj7: Thanx !Highjah 1 12-26 17:14
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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2006-12-22 19:31]

Hello Frederic,
This is a nice stil life with very good colors and beautiful details. A nice mood you created with the warm red light.
TFS...Sky

Frederic,
As a product photo, this has potential. Somme suggestions for next time. Get the background even more out of focus to really concentrate on the bottle. Make sure your backdrop covers all of the back and does not show the gap, up on the right.

As far as lighting, try to get narrower lights to highlight the sides of the bottle so that we don't get overblown lights on the sides of the bottle. This can be achieved by bouncing the light towards reflectors that face the bottle, instead of lighting the bottle directly.

Hopes this helps.

C'est une belle photo pur un spot pub!!
amicalement
Audrey

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