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In focus
Photo Information
Copyright: Jusni Nasirun (jusninasirun) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1142 W: 93 N: 1946] (10338)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-07
Categories: Daily Life, Portrait
Camera: Olympus OM1N, Zuiko 50mm 1:1.4, Centuria DNP 200
Exposure: f/1.4, 1/30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): I shoot film [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-03-06 21:24
Viewed: 2079
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi friends in TL,

A participant of a workshop in Penang is deeply engrossed with his work. Shot taken with Olympus OM-1n and Zuiko 50mm f/1.4.

Thanks for viewing!


EXIF Data
Make: Olympus
Model: OM-1N
Software: ACD Systems Digital Imaging
Exposure Time: 1/30 sec
F-Stop: f/1.4
ISO Speed Ratings: 200
Focal Length: 50 mm
Date Taken: 2009-03-06
© jusni nasirun 2009

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Critiques [Translate]

Competent shot, with good use of the wide lens. Well composed.
Rew

good shot,nice details

Hallo Jusni.
Good camera it is, perfect lens on it.
But the picture is a bit dark in his face and the blurred forgrond should be off, but that had removed a bit og the laptop too.
Man's concentration is well captured.
Cheers,
Jan

Hi MF Jusni, a wonderful capture of your friend in profile with great DOF and nice composition.
Have a nice WE MF!
Cheers,

Bayram

Hi Jusni

Fluorescent light often leaves a slight green color cast, so I would add a bit of magenta to remove it. I also see a slight yellow cast, despite the blue tinted light, on the mans face. Easily fixed, in photoshop. Tfs!

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2009-03-07 8:59]

Hi jusni,
beautiful work.I liked colours and BG.TFS.Necla.

ciao Jusni..
detail and focus expression are really great! good capture and realise! thanks
ciao Marco

aku tak tau la bro.. mcm gambar lama ja.. a bit noisy in some part sama oe.. aku rasa yg kabur depan tu kacau la.. colours mcm pudar ja.. sorry ah bro tu pendapat aku.. apa pun good try ngan camera tu..

regards, terry

Excellent portrait work. Good light and natural expressions.

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  • subs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 0 N: 296] (2670)
  • [2009-03-10 8:25]

Hi Jusni,
Nice moment captured. Excellent profile shot with great DOF.
Regards,
Suabshini

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 733 W: 61 N: 1257] (7137)
  • [2009-03-10 11:30]

Hi Jusni

A sight you can't tell where it is nowadays as it is the same the world over. Computers do most of the work now and the future is the same without the nationality or language barriers. Nice presentation, my friend

TFS
Argiris

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2009-03-11 12:55]

Looks like agood journalistic kind of picture Jusni,good unsharp background.

jan

Interessante esta foto, bonita composição.
Cores ótimas, um bom trabalho Jusni.
Parabéns!
GA
Vera

Hi Jusni,

Nice capture of the man engrossed with his work. The blurred background helps keep the focus on the man. Nice lighting and details. Well done Jusni.

Best regards
Jason.

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