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one apple a day...


one apple a day...
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Copyright: Gisela Back (giba) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 63 N: 33] (327)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-18
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/2.7, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-18 11:36
Viewed: 2482
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Keep well and fit!

for the scav hunt "dinner"
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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2006-11-18 12:14]

Hi.

Love the vibrant colours you have here, welldone indeed.

Stv.

Hi Gisela,
ich sehe, Du hast Dich heute auch zu einem Dinner-shot entschlossen, ich auch ;-)
Tolle Idee und in leuchtenden Farben umgesetzt, gefällt mir. Ich glaub' ich hol' mir auch gleich einen zum Knabbern, lecker!
Danke und liebe Grüße
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Technically good and I like the simplicity but the foreground is wrong; apple red, foreground red, they don’t contrasting. In addition red color is an exciting color. Overall the apple is not pointed out. Try to put it on straw or yellow leafs and then sprinkle it with fine drops of water.

One apple a day keeps Trekies close by. Eventhow the apple is red it is well defined from the red background because of the lighting you have chosen.
Good work.

Sylvain

The cool photograph, a good idea with the square and the red background - good realization

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