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Good Bye!

Good Bye!
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Copyright: silvia pizzimbone (pitzimba) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 62 W: 3 N: 0] (410)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2002-08-10
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/6.0
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-30 14:01
Viewed: 1538
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello friends!

Goodbye in september.
Have an enjoyable holidays !

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hi pitzimba

nice beach shot, a little noisy though in the sky. lady is perhaps a little too far away also. good colours and a good off-centre pov.

regards c.d.

Hi Silvia

There is some great potential in this shot. The subject is nicely placed off-centre, there are good colours here.

However, the horizon is tilted slightly to the left, and is too central. If it was placed much lower in the frame, I think it would be much better.

There is also a lot of grainy noise, for some reason. Some noise-reduction would help!

Visually nice but it could be so much better!


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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2008-07-31 5:46]

Hello Silvia,
I hope this goodbye is just during August. I hope you come back in September. Great compo, and a beautiful depature photo.
Congrats, mb

Have a nice holidays and comeback in septembre
great image
my regards

Hi dear friend,
have a wonderful holiday too!
:) soon

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