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Come, walk this way!


Come, walk this way!
Photo Information
Copyright: Abhijit Kar Gupta (akg) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 305 W: 0 N: 171] (2264)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-11-21
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/8, 1/6 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-11-30 9:45
Viewed: 1483
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The colour of fall! I was walking this way up and down the hills in Proseco, a village behind the city of Trieste. The sun was yet to come out from behind the cloud to do the rest of the magic.
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Hello Abhjit,
What a nice composition and color sperctrum.
It could be better sharp.
Anyway I like it.
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2009-11-30 10:52]

Hallo Abhijit,
A very interesting images you present us today. Nice composition with some more good, congratulations.
Regards,
Adrian

Bonsoir Abhijit,

C'est une image très sympathique aux couleurs généreuses. Une petit peu trouble.
Je me suis permise une retouche infime.
Voir en atelier.
Amicalement.

Yolande

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2009-11-30 21:02]

dear Abhijit,
soft focus makes this image like in a dream,
fantastic road with colorful leaves,
and the depth of perspective is illusionary,
thank you for your wonderful shot0,
Akihisa

Hi Abhitij

Very amazing scene you've captured here
Nice composition with soft colors
Wish a little bit more sharpness and details

TFS, Alireza

Ciao Abhijit



Beautiful color and soft way
vegetation is exotic and beautiful colors,
You show us a wonderful colorful panorama view.
Composition and presentation are very well.

Have a nice day,

Sergio

Olá Abhijit

Linda esta mistura de cores, o contraste
é belo...ótimos detalhes e uma boa textura.
Bonita composição...um belíssimo trabalho.
Parabéns!
GA
Vera

Hi Abhijit!
Nice autumn view!
Lovely colours and good sharpness.
Beautiful artwork.
Greetings
Tadeusz

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
  • [2009-12-02 5:52]

Hi Abhijit,
what a lovely autumn view and colours.I am coming ..:))So beautiful.TFS.Necla.

You have something quite special here with the colors in this image, Abhijit, and you've taken it a step further with your skilled use of the path as a line to draw us into the image.

I think I might have tried a couple of different things to address the overexposure in the top left of the image -- perhaps bracketing your exposures or composing to pick up the path earlier and doing an in-camera crop to avoid that part of the sky.

I also suspect your image could benefit from some sharpening -- which is readily fixable with several free software tools. I'll present a workshop for your consideration to show you what I mean.

Regards,
Jim

I see now that Yolande has done a workshop also. I like the richness of her colors, particularly if that's faithful to the colors that you saw. Perhaps you can learn a little something from each of us?

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