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Dance Recital (18)
dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1672 W: 16 N: 832] (15528)
Going back to the dance recital I attended on Mothers Day. I'm sure you would sooner see her face but I thought it was kind of cute anyway.

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dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1672 W: 16 N: 832] (15528)
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Edited by:Mrlittle Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 667 W: 37 N: 23] (5699)

Cut and pace.

I think in my idea its stronger.
Regards Frans